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for This Is My Story

by nikki7716

schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! xD Seriously, what the hell! Bakura, what is wrong with you?! When a lovely gentleman asks you out, you don't fucking smile and walk away! AHH! -Jumps him- Seriously, Bakura is such a fucking weirdo! Ryou, go beat him down and -make- him date you!

Hehe~. As you can see, I am absolutely loving this story! The second chapter was even better than the first. I really like how you didn't just jump them right into a relationship! For some reason, Bakura is taking the time to get to know Ryou (in his own very fucking weird little way!) and Ryou is, well...probably very freaked out by that. Haha. I think alot of good things are to come from this story! I really like how Ryou had a word count. What a cutie. *__* I am very excited to see what Bakura's thoughts are once he learns a little more about Ryou! I just hope Ryou doesn't get too restless and depressed waiting for an answer to his question. -heartheart-

More soon, I sincerely hope! 8D
schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWW! Ryou was blushing! that's so cute! and you added Dartz too, he's almost NEVER featured as a character! this promises to be enjoyable, don't give up on it!
schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Bakura you are an ASS! How dare you leave my darling Ryou hanging! 'Figuring him out' for WHAT exactly, what in the hell is there to figure out?! He's cute, he's sweet and would probably drop his pants and bend over the nearest available surface for you right this second and you're 'figuring him out'?! BAKA BAKA BAKA Bakura you get back in there and bang that bishie right this minute and don't you dare come back until you have!

Nikki, this is a lovely story, please continue it before I have to beat Bakura within an inch of his afterlife!
person jin1377
schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good story!btw...are you gonna make it more...hot than on ff.net? this is a lovely story and i hope you'll update soon!!! pwease? first review?
person Kaitlyn
schedule December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWWW!
im giggling right now, but im not sure if its from Ryou's inner diolauge or the general cuteness of it all.
Word Count: 26, right?
Ryou. The adorableness on his cute cuddlyness meter couldn't get any higher.
:3