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Okay...*taps foot impatiently* that was just plain evil. Evil I telll you. Yeah, I know how to spell. ^^ anyways...that little asshat Dartz needs to be kicked for his bs! Bakura needs to step in and show him his place! And that's my thought on the subject! *nods*

More of this story NOW. It is good and I would like to read it all the way to the end if you don't mined.

Dartz scares me. xD He sorta reminds me of an ex-boyfriend with how obsessive he is, but at least my ex-boyfriend didn't think he was going to be with me forever on our second date. ._. Poor Ryou. He needs to dump Dartz fast before Dartz gets even more involved. Besides, Bakura is in his apartment (gah, that stalker xD How'd he know where Ryou lived?) and Bakura pwns Dartz any day of the week.

:D I imagine Yugi and I would agree when I say Ryou should just jump Bakura and do things I'm not allowed to type about with a younger sibling moping around somewhere.
But Ryou won't. T_T
So Bakura just needs to hurry up and jump Ryou. :D

Argh.
I need the next chapter. I wanna know what Bakura's doing there!

...A guy practically drooling over you and thinking you'd be together forever at the second date didn't happen to you, too, did it? D:

*Groan* ...RYOU Why didn't you LISTEN?! High pressure, pushy, controlling boyfriends are almost IMPOSSIBLE to get rid of once they get in! Can't you see that Bakura is being SARCASTIC?! You tell him you like him then you run off with that pushy bastard. For crying out loud, even I'M not this dense and that's saying something! Get your act together before you end up doing something you really regret!
Bakura, it really hurt to see Ryou run off with Dartz, right? Why don't you just tell him you like him, so he'll leave that asshole?

Bakura- Ryou can like whoever he wants. And they're cute together. Nice necklace, bit girly but whatever you like... *Pushes Ryou against the door and kisses him senseless*

Ryou- *Melted*

Bakura- So what do you want for Christmas Ryou? I just came by to see what you liked...

Ryou- Bakura...

Bakura- Really? Well I'll see what I can do, I hope your boyfriend won't mind. *Smirk, starts walking away* Goodnight Ryou...

Ryou- *Grabs and pushes Bakura against the side of the house and starts kissing him senseless* Wait, not yet, I haven't told you everything I want for Christmas yet...

Bakura- Have you been THAT good this year?

Ryou- At the moment no, but I don't really care. Why, do you think Santa will punish me?

Bakura- You're being awful naughty...

Ryou- Maybe he'll let YOU punish me instead...

Bakura- Maybe he will, but we'll have to see. *Kisses Ryou senseless and goopy again* Goodnight Ryou-chan...


Cody- BAKURA GET YOUR ASS BACK THERE RIGHT NOW AND FINISH WHAT YOU'VE STARTED!

Bakura- *Smirk*

GRRRRRRRRRRRR

Wonderfully inspiring...*blush* thanks. =)
wow. I don't like Dartz, he reminds me of those dominating gay guys who treat other gay guys as if they are secretly girls, or something (my uncle dated a guy like that one) I really hope he doesn't keep dating Dartz, because that kiss between him and Bakura was *trys to find appropriate word for such hotness* amazingly fantabulously wonderful, and very very overdue.

Only 8 or 9 chapters?? Are you planning another story too? because if not *grabs pitchfork in a threatening manner* Ohh and by the way if you make a bomb come down and kill everyone that would be the funniest frickin thing I've ever read. You should make an alternate ending like that. Perhaps Bakura and Ryou are about to orgasm and BOOM dead. haha. =)

I do not seeing this ending well.. -_-' Ryou you are an idiot for humoring him, Dartz is obviously the controlling type and if you give him the slightest encouragement it will be almost impossible to pry him off of you and your sexy ass. But hey, at least Bakura gave you a good memory for the night, even if the bastard is playing some insane mind games. Now go break the news to Dartz that you are completely in love with someone else, and you'll have to break it to him HARD sweetie or he won't take you seriously. Then go offer yourself to Bakura in whatever way he wants to have you! I think he's just teasing you to see how serious you are... and because he loves playing mind games.

Hey Bakura!

Bakura- Hmm?

Cody- You. Ryou's Ass. NOW!

Bakura- *Smirk* In time.

Cody- Do you want to lose it to Dartz?!

Bakura- No, it just seems to be coming to me all on its own.

Cody- Lazy prick Bastard... -_-'

Bakura- *Smirk*


Please update before I go mad! Or bash Bakura over the head!

You poor thing. D: Personal experience? Some people are so mean. T-T I'm suddenly very happy again I'm married and that never happened to me, and if I'm lucky, it never will happen to me.

Raar.
Dartz scares me with the dove name calling. Ah! What do you say when someone asks if you've been thinking about dating them? That would be weird, I'm with Ryou, spit out the nearest posistive word and continue the conversation.

What exactly does Yugi want Ryou to smother himself in? ._.

...HolyfuckBakurakissedRyou.
8D
About time! I love the way Ryou acts, it just makes me smile. xD Knocking on the door one minute, walking away passively the next, although Bakura has a really good idea of how to make people passive. Really, really good.
I'm sure Ryou will be even more confused about what's going on in his life when he actually gets to thinking about the kiss. Someone kissing you then wishing you luck with your current date-person-thing has to be confusing. Gah, Bakura confuses me. xD I'm very interested in how all of this is helping him figure Ryou out.

Blame stupid spelling mistakes on my fever. Damn cold. I've re-read it but I'm sure there's something. -_-

lmao. I love it. Ryou is hilarious, and smexy. lol I absolutely love it.

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I am so fugging glad I got bored and decided to read this ficcie.
Poor Ryou! Ohmigod, if I practically asked someone on a date and they just walked away without a word, I would die. D: Bakura's lucky Ryou's so shy, if someone walked away from me then a week later said "I'm figuring you out," I would have a serious problem with that and would probably voice it. Maybe. If I didn't run out of the bathroom in mortification before that point.
This ficcie was so inspiring when it came to telling your crush you like them...at first. Then Ryou got the bravery and said it. After that, I'm just glad I'm married because I'll never be able to tell another person I'm crushing on them without thinking they'll walk away without saying anything. xD
AJjkasjfakjsfa. I'm prone to rambling. ._.
Basically. I love it so far, even if Bakura has scarred me for life when it comes to crushes (thank god I read this AFTER I got married or I'd be screwed). And I can't wait for the rest. And for Bakura to finally figure Ryou out so Ryou doesn't die of embarrassment.

...And Yami so totally ruined Yugi's little innocent mind. X3

Ch. 1!

I really like it so far. ;D It's alot of fun to read! I like how Ryou couldn't even hear Bakura when he was talking to him. Hehe~. It was very cute! Malik and Ryou used to date? Psh, at least they got over that so Ryou could get onto bigger, better things! ;D Like Bakura. Yum! Well, next chapter! I really liked the first one!