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YOU SLEPT WITH HIM?! *Slap* Ryou you Idiot! Yuck! Fuck Bakura a few more times to get that image out of my head! Go! Right now mister!
Ryou runs off and curls into Bakuras' embrace
Bakura-- Thanks Cody :D. Aww does my Ryou need punished?
*Nod*
Bakura-- Well then, I'll just have to punish you until you're sorry for what you did and beg for my forgiveness...
Cody-- Oh this I GOTTA see!

I really liked this chapter even if I did get violently nauseous at the thought of Dartz' paws on my Ryou-chan. Yas I think Dartz will definitely seek revenge, he's a rich, narcissistic megalomaniac, and he'll probably go after Bakura too... blaming him for Ryou's lapse in what Dartz perceived as perfect love and faithfulness. Not to mention Ryou humiliated him in public and took a direct shot at his manly pride in bed. Oooh I can't wait for more, thank you for the pretty! And I can think like Bakura because I used to have a friend who played mind games, and I was the only one who saw what was really going on, and figured the stupid things out first. So I guess prior experience has helped me once again. update soon!

Yaaaay! I love this story! I also love how Bakura is cocky...but not too much so. I can't really explain it. I just love everything! XP

So cool...I love this story

YAY FOR RYOU! I love it when that boy loses his temper. It was about time, I don't know how he standed it for so long. The fact that his losing-of-the-temper led to hot sex with Bakura doesn't have anything to do with my happiness, though. Of course not. I'm just entirely happy that Ryou stood up for himself.
Yeah.

D:
Poor Ryou needs to have lots more smex with Bakura to get the images of Dartz out of his brain.

Yay for Yami calling Yugi away before Ryou and Malik were exposed to intimate hickeys. Ha. You know one day Ryou'll have to ask Yugi for sex advice, if only for curiosity's sake. But Ryou ought to bring Malik along if he does that so if Yugi goes way out of line, there's someone to at least be scarred for life with.

I feel kinda bad for Dartz, it's not his fault he's such a freak. But I'm rooting for Bakura, so Dartz'll just have to deal with the pain. Bakura's actions make more sense now, damn him for not coming out and saying what he wanted. But hey, I'm with you, I don't care what Bakura says or doesn't say, I'd totally go along with it just because it's him. xD

HE HE HE! WOW! It's like you took it from the conversation I wrote and turned it into a beautiful lemon! Woohoo! Ryou got Bakura for Christmas! Well our Christmas anyway, I don't think it's christmas in the storyline. And somehow I KNEW Bakura was gonna do that. I think I'm figuring out his thought process. and it's kind scary. God Bakura, you're going to destroy him at this rate, and Ryou I think he wants you to take some more of that lovely initiative and dump Datz's ass before he'll sweep you away again. and God Ryou, don't even bother feeling guilty. Dartz ISN'T worth it.

Bwaha! Ryou finally snapped, I'm glad he started yelling. Poor boy deserves a good scream fit every once in awhile.

FINALLY! Bakura took the initiative! I guess Ryou and Yugi have something to talk about now. And maybe Yugi's suggestions will be taken more seriously. :D
Gah! But Ryou better strangle Bakura for being such a mysterious bastard. My head would have blown by the point of that note. I can't wait to see Bakura's weird logic to all of this. xD

YES WRITE THE ALTERNATE ENDING! and even if you dont wanna post it here, send it to me!!!

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ok so I read Ch. 4 and had something to say like, Dartz is weirding me out a lot. Especially with the whole necklace thing in Ch. 5. But once I finished Ch 5 I totally forgot what I was going to say about Ch 4 abd the only thought in my head was
Hot.
Damn.
*squees*
FINALLY! SLASHY GOODNESS FOR ME!
SLASHY GOODNESS FOR ME!
SLASHY GOODNESS FOR KAITLYN *mumbles "and all the other readers"*
SLASHY GOODNESS FOR MEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!
But I dont like that Bakura just up and left!
he better have a damn good reason too. like his cat was about to be eaten by nomadic dolphins or something.

Bakura: I'm hot. I don't need a reason.
Kaitlyn: *death glare*

Holy hell that was freaking hilarious!!! I laughed my ass off! And believe me that's a lot of ass to laugh off! ^_^; I think I have a new respect for the Bakura/Ryou coupling. Normally I'm strictly Y/Y (don't ask...something about short men with attitude problems :) Still better than anything with Kaiba - who I have some serious issues with (damn arrogant men). I really like the start of this one!

Ah, that was just as great as the first chapter! Which btw, I'm still laughing about!

*snorts* Ryou really needs to tell that Dartz guy to get a clue! *mutters under breath* Had a guy do that to me one time...it was the last time I saw him, he ended up with a plate of spagetti all over his new outfit! Did I mention how much I hate guy with ego issues???