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for This Is My Story

by nikki7716

schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't know who I want to hit more right now, Bakura or Ryou, but since I'm against Ryou-abuse, I guess I'll be smacking Bakura. Why must I always ask for brutal murder...?

I understand Ryou running off to Malik, no matter how much I wanna shake him for it. But...argh! Bakura confuses me all the more. Damn him and his enigmaness. Boys can be so much trouble, I never did understand them. You and your damn twists. D:

Is it just me or do my reviews get shorter and shorter? But. Raar, I love this fic, I just have trouble reviewing sometimes. Your idea, with the other views and stuff. :D You should do that.
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Uh Ryou I said have sex with Bakura a FEW more times, not go and bang like bunnies in the springtime fresh out of prison with an endless supply of spanish fly. you need to assert SOME control in this relationship, or you'll never really be happy. And Bakura STOP using sex as an excuse to try and get out of answering all the personal questions and let the beauty get to know you before you lose him! You mistreat my Ryou I will kill you in several painful ways! I am mostly Italian and German, with a nice dose of Irish, Scottish, French and Polish thrown into the mix, and I help run a working replica torture exhibit at renaissance faires, trust me you do NOT want to piss me off!

I'm so glad you updated, this story makes me so happy! update again soon please!
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
woowww..great chapter! and, I gave you the idea for the update heads-up? *pointpoint* no one else asked?
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
xD I never thought of Yugi demonstrating, but you're probably right, he would.

Gasp. Bakura, kinky? Who would have known? -Insert sarcasm here.-
Ah, but poor Ryou. D: Bakura's being a meany again. Gah. Bakura's character is so frustrating to me, I know he's just this way but I want to slap him upside the head for making Ryou worry so much! Anyone else and I'd let him have his way, but I'm so protective of little Ryou. T-T
person Kaitlyn
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...Ryou doesnt want to have sex...
HAS HE GONE INSANE! i mean this is Bakura!
gosh. *disappointed* haha.

speaking of sex, you write lemons so well i swear! i mean you make it personal not like...
"and he fucked me with his rod of delicious man meat." haha.

you never planned on having Dartz get revenge? he must be very uncaring about being dumped so harshly then. i wish i could find a boyfriend (ex) like that! i get all the crazies...

my email: blood-red-eyes@hotmail.com
schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is great, I can't wait til the next chapter! When you do add to this, do
you think that you could send me an email with the web address to let me know?
the email is PotionsPet@tidni.com
person Kaitlyn
schedule December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay! awesome ending for me!
awesome ending for me!
finally Ryou drops that freako Dartz, and in a public place too. that makes it all the better!
I loved the "so why dont you just kill yourself line." that was bloody brill.
and that ending was so adorable. i usually hate cute...but i cant resist!!
im just a bit worried for Ryou about what will happen when Dartz finds out about him and Bakura...
person tavia454
schedule December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
God this is great! I about laughed my ass off at what Ryou yelled at Dartz! He still should have given him a swift kick for good measures. And Bakura is still an indecipherable ass - as always. But his so sexy when he's like that! Great chapters - sorry, I didn't realize that this one was up the last time I was on here. Which was a couple of weeks ago. But anyways - great chapters!!!!
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mimi is amused, what will happen next?
Update soon I COMMAND YOU!
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh damn it ended!
GREAT Story, nice and sexy

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