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for This Is My Story

by nikki7716

person Kaitlyn
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg. i cant believe i missed it all until now!
-feels bad- i just noticed when i saw 'this is my tale' up and i was all.
shiitt, she finished 'tims'.
hahah! TIMS. =)
it was a good ending! but sadly no one was blown up.
but at least everything with Malik...and Dartz...and Bakura...and the whore down the street (justkidding)worked out!
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Stole internet and SQUEE! great last chapter! I totally didn't see that one coming! great job I love it!
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww it's over, I'm gonna start on My Snow White Angel now so if you could start giving me the heads up on that one now that this is done, it'd be great. btw, can't wait to see how the new fic you mention turns out
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gasp. I'm glad I read the review reply after the chapter. I could have ruined it for myself. D:

YAY! It ended happy! Malik and Dartz together scares me, but what the heck? Now I don't feel so bad for Dartz, I just hope Malik doesn't suffocate him with a pillow one night...

Bakura got his priorities sorted. It worries me how he knows things, though. He is a very scary man with all his resources and know-how. x; But Ryou's happy with him, so I'm happy. :D

Can't wait for your next story. Ugh. I wish I could do a nice long review for the last chapter, but... my mind blanks here.
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
D: People not reviewing? They should all be smacked with sticks. Maybe it was because the stuff with Malik scared them a little bit?

Short chapter, but good content. Poor Malik, Ryou's breaking his heart now. It's gotta be hard for Ryou to do that, especially since Ryou's so torn up over it himself. I hope they can work it out. Ryou needs to sit down and have a talk with Bakura, straighten some things out in their relationship and get a foothold. That would probably help out the inner turmoil. And Malik. Malik needs to find someone so he's not hung up on Ryou. Or Malik could steal Ryou away, but Bakura would probably be a teensy bit upset over that. Maybe. xD I mean, he might not care, but if he considers Ryou his now, problems arise. Ah. I ramble.

I want Malik and Ryou to work it out, it's so sad when friends have to part over something like that.
schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is beyond beautiful....It's so emotional.......and I can't predict where you are taking this story..........PLZ continue. you are a real talent and I just admire your work.
schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OK with how bakura had started acting and how malik and Ryou interacted, I can't say I'm all that surprised, and only 2 more? *Tear* but it's such a good story! yes! bigger series! yes yes yes!
schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear oh dear oh dear. Ryou is in quite the sticky pickle... although at this point I think I'm rooting for Malik. Come on Ryou sweety, you gotta face the truth...


And as for no reviews it's nothing like that from me my dear, my internet stopped working so I have to steal my Aunts, and I'm in the process of moving, so I'm kinda busy,*Look up: Has too much crap and no where to put it* I just got to read the chappies today infact. Gods I miss this place! *sigh* well, I'm off to read the rest and then I must go back home and keep packing. I'll be back online in a few weeks. I'll miss you till then!
schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awwww...
person Epsilon
schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, poor Malik!

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