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for This Is My Story

by nikki7716

person Anon
schedule October 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awwww. This story was sweet, cute, funny, and sad(the good and the bad sad.)
I'm glad it all worked out in the end.
XD Oh and I loved ch. 3 with Ryou and Bakura. I was giggling and squealing like a school-girl.
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch6
I love the way you relay all the thoughts Ryou is having while he interacts with the various characters; You're style is refreshing.

Ok, he didn't need to be so hateful to Dartz, but you did walk us through the mounting frustration. Still he could have waited just a little longer till afterwards and spoke to him, or even asked him to step outside.

Poor Dartz, but I'm sure he'll get even and earn the telling off. LOL It's just who he is.

Aww, Ryou and Malik are so cute. You made them the best of cuddle buddies. Too bad bakudoesn'tset up malik with his buddy Marik. Yum. LOL

This is such and excellent story.
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMGosh, Ryou and Malik.. Hawt!!
Ok, so is it going to be conspire shipping.. Squeels* in anticipation... I love conspire... Ooooww..

maybe Baku won't be mad then. LOL I love tender shipping, I do, I swear...and Thief shipping, angst shipping, even death shipping, but oh Conspire shipping!!! Yes.. I hope, I hope, crosses fingers*
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch9

Awww Poor Malik. Nooo.. He's my favorite honey..

Poor Ryou too, he's lying to himself.
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh no my connection died.. just as I was sending a review

No bronze shipping, that had me surprised. Malik and dartz O.o..ok.. eww


So no conspire shippy?? Sniff* Oh Ryou, what were you thinking... Baku is awesome, but so is Malik.
person hyde
schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this sounds like my last relationship! I am soo there where Ryou is. Love the story.
person Calcifer
schedule March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*teary eyed* What a wonderful ending! It's very cute how the two hearts that Ryou had broken ended up happy together.

Very good job. Keep up the good work!

~Angel
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww... Such a wonderful touching story. Ryou and Malik would've gotten good together, but I still believe in one of my OTP: RyouxBakura. He he~! ^^
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know i'm kinda late in finding this story but...yeah. Great! I loved it. I could totally imagine how a high school dartz would look...HOT! You did an excellent job. Now i feel guilty for not reading it while it was still an ongoing series. I'll make up for it by reading the others...and reviewing...and rating ^_^
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I didn't review the last few chapters...but it was so awesome. Don't know if it has been suggested, but a Seto perspective would be awesome. Seeing how he reacts to his puppy would be fantastic, and a great thing to do after the Yugi story...which I am about to scoot over to. Instead of, of course, finishing the epilogue of my story...