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for Bride of Camula

by WotanAnubis

schedule October 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey There, I am that guy who also reviewed your other Yugioh GX story. Good work with this one. I liked it. I always had a fondness for Alexis. I was almost baffled but remembered that anything can happen in a dream. Hmm, I guess I could say.....maybe the grass scene was a little cliche. Probably would have been more erotic (yet creepy and familiar for Camula) somewhere more barren, more ominous I guess. Ah well, good show nonetheless. Ja Ne (also how do you add stories to the Bleach Catagories, can't find the catagory when I choose for one)
person gaia lover
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
cool fic, can't wait to see what happens next.
person Just A Random Yuri Fangirl
schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*o* I cannot express in words how much I love you right now. At long last, somebody wrote a fic... with Camula... and YURI!! *glomps* It was very well written I feel that everything was well placed. Especially the mention of the moon and Camula being the only ones "existing" in Alexis' dream while everything else faded away. *nods* I'm not quite sure if this is a one-shot or if you plan to continue, but either way, this was a very good fic! ^__^ Five stars in my book.
person Anon
schedule December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Pretty great, it would be great to see it continued, but its great like it is right now too!