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January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's very, very rare that I read a fic where I have nothing bad to say about it. I really liked this little snippet and, somehow, I can see how it fits perfectly with Yuugi's personality and the stress of bearing Atemu's soul puts him under.
This was very, very well written. Congratulations!
This was very, very well written. Congratulations!
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January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Freakin' awesome. I kinda wish in a half-hearted way that Yugi had really fallen, and that was the end, but the whole story wouldn't have been complete then. I like how you put in the Egyptian belief about true names. There were a lot of cultures that believed that... Makes me wonder sometimes.
Anywho, great job!
Anywho, great job!
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December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
“You’ve been up here too long if you’re commenting on the aesthetics of the sidewalk, aibou.” my favorite line from any story ever. I may or may not have reviewed this before (as I am really bad at remembering to do that kind of thing.) but I've come to the conclusion that this is my favorite of all the YGO fanfiction I've ever read. *applause*
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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O_O this is like... all my fantasies rolled into one fic. The intimacies and, just, everything... Perhaps you would write a sex scene?
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November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness. So cute! You really did succeed at writing their mindlink, and with the magic, and all that you were trying to achieve. There's something unbelievably perfect about Atemu smoking that I'd never really thought about before. I really loved this, and will probably come back to read it again and again.
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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWWW!!You are updating stories from ff.net.Actually I hope that you know I love all of your stories so I don't need to say that that story is great,too!!!But plz update "The Garden"I really wonder what will happen in the next chap.
SEE YOU LATER
BERRY(OR blueberry90)
SEE YOU LATER
BERRY(OR blueberry90)
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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! That was incredible! But don't give me a freaking near heart attack like that! I was really worried that Yugi was suicidal and that Yami was encouraging it! He could have just gone skydiving, base jumping, or bungee jumping instead of scaring the pants off of everyone! Sheesh! I liked this one a lot, and can I PLEASE pretty pretty please steal one of the paragraphs for one of my stories? I swear I'll credit you!
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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing!!! You are such an awesome writer
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November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
DAMN that was really good.. you had me going there for a little bit...but I love fics like that... is there going to be anouther chapter or even a sequel. MUCH love~~~
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November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful.
I, myself was ready to gasp in fright wondering what Yugi was going to do. Silly me should have known that Yami wouldn't allow Yugi to become hurt.
Lady D
I, myself was ready to gasp in fright wondering what Yugi was going to do. Silly me should have known that Yami wouldn't allow Yugi to become hurt.
Lady D