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for A Series of One Shots

by nikki7716

person yamiyugi
schedule December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I must say that Chapter nine, by far, was the best. I couldn't believe how you wrote that one. I laught so hard when I read the last part. That was the best, so far. I don't have any request just writting you a review. I love your stories and you seem to be a great writer. Keep it up when all the others.
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Atemu/Yugi. My usual favorite couple, very nice "Pharaoh/slave scenario. Nice touch Yugi/Malik fooling around. Only because I often search for that pairing. Don't know why but I find this couple kind of sweet. I find myself always checking for your next chapters, regardless of the pairings now. I enjoy your work. Thanks for putting it out there. Looking forward to hearing from you again. Later.
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
SQUUUUUUUUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! That was great! I adored it! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! *Glomp!* SQUEE! ^_^ you made me so happy! Thankies!
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! I really enjoyed reading the story. AND I got a nice lemon out of it. *squeels in delight* Why did they have to stop seeing each other? *pouts* Oh well, I can't wait for the YamixYugixJouxSeto and the SetoxSethxJou stories. Don't be afraid to write lemons. Everyone needs a little citrus in their lives. *smirks* Update soon.
person tavia454
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, and to top it all off, I desparately needed to lose myself in a well written lemon today - it's been really shitty! So, thank you for sharing! Huh, read your bottom notes - and here I thought my husband and I were the only people to use the word ass-hat?! *snickers* Shows you how much I know ^_^; Anyways, great lemon, and I will be looking forward to more when you get the chance. btw, how in the hell do you find so much creativity for all of these -whenever I do one it takes about a week for me to even come close to getting it right - and even then I tend to fuck up towards the end! You have some awesomely perverted little plot bunnies! Love it!
person Kaitlyn
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you like long reviews? good! ill keep giving them because it seems every time i get on the computer i come straight to aff.net and check to see if this is updated. haha.
it probably is the fact that you posted so many so quick. it didnt give people enough time to "taste" your story, in a sense.
im that way too, my friends love my stories, and i love writing them, but i always think they're crap at the end.
ive been trying to write a *blush* dirty story on fanfiction.com, not to much though just like *blushes again* groping and stuff. =) my pairing is for HP. Tom Riddle and Harry Potter. BUt ive recently started watching YuGiOh again and LOVED Marik and Bakura.
question. are you going to go on forever with this oneshot series?? that would be awesome cause then i could just keep requesting my pairing 100 times and fill up on my ansty/ fluffy/ sexy/ kinky couple any time i wanted! haha.
by the way, this Seth/Seto one made me wanna check out the pairing some more. its so cute and sad the way you made it.
and another thing *continues gabbering more* i LOVE that you reply to your reviews! i hate authors who, when i ask a question or give advice (which is rare), that they never reply. its like i wrote that for nothing. so yeah im done now. =)
person Wicabeth
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's so weird to see Seto being anything but an asshat XD but, he can definitely be loving when he wants to be.
person Kaitlyn
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
btw way. sorry!
i have another request that wormed its way into my mind.
forbidden love, angsty Mokuba/ Seto??
incest is one of my favs and that with pairing i can hardly find any really good ones.
and could silk be involved?? in ANY way. and no rape.
person KlebKat
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Pairing 1: Yami no Bakura/Yugi

Kinks: Could YB be using Shadow Magic in his quest to "play" with Yugi?

Pairing 2: Pegasus/Jou

Kinks: I'd really like Pegs calling Jou "Joseph", but if you like going by Japanese names better, I don't mind if it's not included....and teady bears. There should be cute, fluffy teady bears in the story.
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ah chapter 2 Atemu/Bakura. The Pharaoh and the Thief, like this one shot. Especially in the the "short and bitter sweet" its written in