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for A Series of One Shots

by nikki7716

schedule December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yayeee! Seme Yugi, nice to see him take the top occasionally. What a fun one shot! I love your work.
person Kaitlyn
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
damn. i havent been on in forever! At least I had a bunch too read though!!
im actually going because I won a contest with a few dozen other people. =)
You started reposting my Snow White Angel! I hope you get a lot more reviews, it really is a great story!
and a new chapter of TIMS! *happy dances*

As always, wonderful oneshots! A perfect way to end a terrible day!
so thank you *huggles*
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You need to stop giving Yugi and Yami sugar! It brings me back to that nightmare I had of them on a sugar high with Dan Green's voice. Ugh. ;D
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, nice twist at the end, there. You know you seem to have a knack for "interesting" endings. That alone, makes all your one shots worth reading.
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thies. Was. AWESOME! I loved it! thank you thank you thank you!
person Wicabeth
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*chuckles* No problem hon. I didn't know what it was at first either XD

Mmm.. And yes, Bakura can watch, or join in, anytime. *COUGHJOININ* *snickers*
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Seto, that has to be fairly awkward for about 3.5 seconds...and in my mind, the awkardness ends there because 'Kura totally has to join that party. :D

Ack! You faced one of my biggest fears in this chapter. xD I've always known it takes a particularly high amount of trust to let someone tie you up, but if they leave you... well, what are you supposed to do? Luckily for Seto, Ryou didn't leave him, just teased a bit.
That would have been slightly amusing, though, for all parties except Seto.
"Ryou? Ryou, it's been hours. I'm sorry, I really am, but...I do have to get back to work!"
"How long are you going to leave him like that, hikari?"
"'Til he stops begging to go to work."
"He's going to be stuck here forever..."
"I know."
"I'm rubbing off on you, aren't I?"
"Eh. Wanna go out for breakfast?"
Luckily for Kaiba, you're no where near as mean as I am! Actually, I couldn't do that either, it would be too mean on my part...

I like this chapter. Ryou and Bakura are two halves of the same soul, of course one would like the other around. xD
person tavia454
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, one more time - just so I can get this right...oh sorry, damn thing wouldn't let me review until I signed in, and then I forgot my password. *ugh, dumb ass, smacks self in head* Sorry, and your right, you get to blackmail me. I got caught up in a load of RL bullshit and forgot all about your story sorry sorry sorry. But that last chapter was VERY nice! I'll get to that other story now. You so got to keep this one coming, I love it!!!
schedule December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohh, I love your story. So many pairings in one story. If it's possible could you make a fic of YamixRyou or a BakuraxYamixRyou threesome? I would appreciate it a lot. I don't really have a kink, just some bondage would be nice
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH MAH GAWD~!!! The pairing I requested of you is perfect! Simply perfect! I love it, love it, love it!!! Thank you, thank you, thank you! Can I make another request pairing? How about another SetoxJoey, but as an angst theme that ends up with lotsa lotsa smex and realization for each other's love?