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for A Series of One Shots

by nikki7716

schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*lol at the ending*
person right_read_time
schedule May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HiYa! Last time I said that was 2009-01-19. Whatcha doing? How you've been? Good to hear from ya. Yes we do care about your list. And since my request sits last, I will still be checking up on ya faithfully at least until mines is written. So you go girl. right_read_time/tinkletimekelly/ladydodobird
schedule March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Eep, I haven't reviewed in forever. I'm sorry! D:

Heh, PegasusSeto. Such an odd pairing to me, but I really liked how this worked. Pegasus is just like "Lolwhut?" the whole time.
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
whoot! it was weirdness, but it was whoot worthy weirdness. Another lovely chapter.
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love yugioh yaoi! yami atem kaiba seth seto and pegasus are so sexy! i wish you could find or write some more monsterfics like darkmagicianxcelticcuardian! thank you !!!
person HannaFO
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm normally not that big of a Seto x Pegasus fan, but your story i actually managed to read to the end :P
Very nice work! Thanks for the update!

And at the subject of a bleach oneshot, I love the idea.. As iI love bleach :)
I truely hope you will open a oneshot fic for bleach, the guys there are just to delicious :D
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was deliciously different~
schedule January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg the calculator...*snickers* yes I think most ppl would feel uninformed if their partner pulled one of those out
schedule January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I...just a sec *goes and changes panties before coming back to review*

Ok I have just one question! Did that person ASK for breath play or did you decide to write that all on your own?! Because NO ONE ever just WRITES breath play! It's practically a taboo subject! No one seems to understand how much of a turn on it can be to have your lovers hands around your throat while they ride you for all you're worth and- *Blushes* Excuse me. ... *censored activities with wife*

Alright where was I? Oh right, no one seems to understand how much of a turn on breath play can be! they all look at me like I'm crazy, or they think I'm into torture and pain and weird stuff like... wait, I mean they think I'm into REAL pain and torture and... and I just keep digging myself deeper don't I?

What I'm trying to say is thank you for writing this and for proving that one of my favorite personal kinks isn't as horrible as everyone seems to think it is. ...my wife thanks you too...for slightly different reasons... *Blush*

And just for the record, I find that a wide belt works best for the purpose. It cuts off air better and more comfortably than rope without leaving as prominent a mark or risking Rope burn. It's also easy to tighten or loosen with a single hand, leaving the other free...

And if you think I would ever cancel a request you are crazier than me! I still want it and any others I may have requested!
schedule January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
F*ck, I just wanted to see what he'd do with the calculator. lolz
Cancel one of the two MalikxMarik's and it's one less. :) Any one of those that inspires you will be jut fine. Sorry to heap on o many, but you're jut o darn creative.

Even the pairings I don't like are outrageous. Besides, you are giving me an impromptu sex ed class since I'm apparently WAYYYY behind the times. lolz It will sure help with he outlines to the next three chs of IT Was Over being ready to have their respective smex scenes written.