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by nikki7716

schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the seto fics. they're very good.
So I got another kinky request for you.

Seto and Mokuba having sex, then getting caught by Joey, Seto's b/f.

Good luck with that one :p
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL~!!! Another sex-crazed Yugi! Now that is hilarious the way Yugi writes his diary compared to the 'proper' way Seto writes his. He he! You did good work as usual, as expected from a Yaoi One-Shot Kami like you :D
person Wicabeth
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ouch XD I know what you mean about people writing their entire stories like that. I always feel my brain die a little more when I run across them XD

*snickers* It was interesting at least to see this different format. I like the whole presenting of a story through journal/video entries that give you enough of the information, but let you wonder about the missing parts. (That's why I loved Blair Witch Project and Cloverfield so much XD
person Wicabeth
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh god.. XD I squeed with glee, laughed, and gagged a little while reading this. Now, to get all those emotions out of me for just one chapter is pretty damn good XD

Oh lord XD Bakura with his bag just killed me...
person tavia454
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahah! *snorts* That one with Seto, Yugi and Yami was great!!! Yeah, I understand your complaint about how people actually write like that! It's a valid point. But still, that was great!!!
person tavia454
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh Hell No! That was soooo freaking funny! Damn I almost peed my pants! Now I have to pee! So a short review for you while I'm doing the peepee dance! Damn, you went there! I have tears in my eyes right now and cant even type to save my life! That was great! Gross, but great! Later
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ryou better hurry up and potty train Bakura. xD Geez.

That whole situation was such a hikari thing to do. Why just bitch about your yamis when you can bitch about your yamis and have sex at the same time! Such smart boys they are, really.

But now you know the yamis are gonna want in on this weekly frustration letter-outer.
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked the journal thing. Yugi is so hyperactive.

xD God, Yami and Yugi are such whores. I hope they survive if they try that out on Bakura, they should probably just stick with Seto. <33
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ha, the Seto/Tristan was kinda funny. Damn, I wanted to see the rest! That's another of of the pairings I like that's hard to find! Good job!
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thing is, I could see him as a hyperactive little girl...thats just the angelic Yugi...and I gotta finish Chapter 6 instead of reading more fan fics...grrr