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for A Series of One Shots

by nikki7716

schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love Yami/Yugi, be it in love, hate, lust, it's all good. Another nice one shot thanks for writing
schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And of course instead of going to bed, here I am again, this time it being 7 A.M. But that's when fanfiction are best right?

Story 26: Ok, I don't really know who these characters are, because I am shamefully behind on my Yu-Gi-OH! as in haven't even seen half of Battle City shamefully behind *cry*, but that was really hot. I liked it when Pegaus showed up, he always makes thing even better lol. They so should have threesomed it out LOL.
Story 27: Oh wow...Yuugi is awfully vicious when he wants something... I don't blame Mariku and Bakura...I'd be terrified too if someone was all happy go cheery after something like that, wanting to do it again...Though, I would have taken the money, I love money far more than it is healthy to...
Story 28: That. Was. Just. Hot. I love Seto office sex, and taking it from his personal assistant no less MmMm! That is one of the hottest things I have read, it made me blush even. ME, blush!? Absurd as it is, it did indeed make me blush, and a little hot under the collar, well, if I was wearing a collar lol. (P.S. I have a god complex, hence my undying love for Seto Kaiba, and Seijuro Hiko from Rurouni Kenshin) I love how nonchalantly he shoos Roland away after they're done lol.
Story 29: Lol Friendship Cult. That sucked for Tristan, it was all just a day dream. But omg was that one kinky day dream lol. And I hate it when I'm having day dreams, or dreams in general, and they get interupted at the BEST part, that is why phones are the epiphany of all evil.
Story 30: OMG Seto is my hero, and you for the idea, he fired the cleaning staff cause he didn't write in his diary...I wish to someday become as rich as him. Oh Yuugi, Dark Magician slippers LMAO. Oh Yami you evil, evil genius, RECORDING IT?! Seto would KILL you if he found out... Ok, that was hot, and funny. I loved it XD!!! I liked that it was written in the diary form, that made it really interesting and funny, to Seto's, but mostly Yuugi's, reaction to things. LOVED LOVED LOVED!!! But like you said in your A/N, it is sad when authors write their fanfiction that way normally... But in that format I LOVED IT!!!

That was an extremely entertaining batch of fics. I really need to catch up on my YGO... Good thing the second season is on its way w00t! Well, I'm off to go play Harvest Moon, which has to be the oddest addicting gam ever...
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You deserve all the praise I give! =)
I probably come off as some creepy crazed fan.
LOL. Oh well! It's worth it! Anyway...YAY! Number 200!!!
WOOT WOOT! Loved this story.
Not enough people go into the harsh Pharaoh side of Yami.
I'm glad someone requested this because it rocked my socks.
Me?! Request?! Hm...I feel like a kid in a candy store.
Uh...How about some more sadistic events from Bakura?
How about Bakura/Duke or Bakura/Seto? One or the two.
Gotta go read "This Is My Life" Seto/Joey now!!!
Keep up the EXCELLENT WORK!!!
=)
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This one..was one of the darkest I had seen in a while, and such a complete departure from the norm.

As for the Seto/Jou story


MOREMOREMOREMORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gah~!!! How could you do this to poor little Yugi~?! Boo hoo hoo hoo~! *cries a river* Now my imagination of the perfect Yami is ruined...~! T_T Nah, just kidding. I've always thought Yami could have a violent side. You picture him well. Keep it going!
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Breaking my brain and twisting my mind at the same time cannot be good for me! Especially so close to finals and Nationals! STOP appealing to my sadistic Ryou side! The damn stuff had it's own freaking muse and it took me 2 years to kill it off the last time, if it comes back now, I might never get rid of it, and I love Ryou being sweet...

(No you don't)

no really I do...

(LIAR)

Oh no, not again, <_< >_> <_< ... I really truly do!

(Don't lie to yourself, that's just pathetic)

WHY ARE YOU LOOKING AT ME LIKE THAT?! I want him to stay sweet!

(No you don't, you want to let him play in the most painfully twisted ways that I can think up, and I have SUCH good ideas for him, and I've had SOOOO long to think about them too. Although I have to admit, the bondage was pretty kinky at first... burying me alive however was not.... and you called ME a twistedly sadistic freak?)

LA LA LA!!! I'm Not Listening! I don't like him sadistic, I don't like him sadistic, I don't like him sadistic!!!!!

(Yes you do, and this time, you can't stop me!) *Evil Laugh*

>_<' GAH! NOOOOOO! DAMNIT! Now I'll NEVER finish that fluff piece! This is all your fault Nikki! I will always and forever blame you for this!!!

(Thank you, with her stupid 'romance' crap out of my way I can begin to write the REALLY good stuff!)

*Goes off to write sadistic Ryou angst*

(HE HE HE HE Oh the things My pretty shall play with... all the pretty toys.... Let's drug Bakura and tie him to the bed, then Ryou will take a knife and he'll teach Bakura the REAL meaning of 'Slave'! Ooooh the ideas are flowing already! heh heh heh...)
schedule February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I...feel..like..I'm...gonna...hurl...too... *BLARGH~!!!!* Now THAT is reli sadistic, man! I reli do feel sorry for Pegasus. Keep it up! Can't wait for more!
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So am I...my babies are my life...and while I don't usually go for the 'pain' stuff thank you for the update.
person Wicabeth
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You're right, it's hard to find good Jou/Yugi stories D= But I always get to squeal with the fanart XD


This chapter: ..... c.c;;;; Blood o.o;;;;

*gets a glass of water* o.o;
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay...you are FUCKING amazing!!!
I have been wanting to review forever but was too lazy to make an account on this site, but JUST FOR YOU, I did.
I LOOOOOOOOOOOOVE these fics! They're always good; I haven't read one that was disappointing to me yet.
Keep up the PHENOMINAL WORK.
PS.
I HOPE I'm lucky review number 200!!!
=)