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for A Series of One Shots

by nikki7716

schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The clueless bakura was soooo cute ^_^ I was cheering on ryou's knowledge and muttering things like 'yeah make 'em wet' under my breath. That was one of the best ones thus far. You RAWK!
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL~! I swear I've never laughed so hard reading a YuGiOh hentai fanfic. Bakura and Marik are just full of surprises! I can't stop laughing at the part where Bakura cried his crocodile tears, and Marik's attempt to boo hoo his way into Malik's heart at the ending was fucking hilarious!

Don't worry about Yami. I'm fine with you writing him as a badass, just don't overdo it...much :D
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's fine, I don't want to be a bother. Other people enjoyed it and that's what is important, right? I'm going to try and write my own little oneshot, and I know it's not going to be easy, but I thought I'd give it a shot. I think you do a marvellous job writing these for people, I know that I would never be able to do that. *bows*

Lady D
person Wicabeth
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I'm quite set on the way I precieve Yami/Yugi XD That story was way too dark for me ;.;

*chuckles* This one definitely made up for it though XD
schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O.O Oh dear. Not quite like I imagined it. I actually couldn't bear to read through it all. I never imagined Yami abusive, just possessive. Dark doesn't mean evil, not like this... I was hoping a possessive obsession, "You're mine, only mine." and so such. Never hurt Yugi. Others who threaten him? Sure. But Yugi? Never. I guess I should have elaborated better? Thank you anyways. I've never had someone write something requested by me.

Lady D
schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was the first time i was upset at an interupted suicide attempt. Poor yug :( Somebody needs to kick yami's ass *growl*
schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Seriously, you are trying to warp me, oh well I could use some warping, and yes, I shall now venture over and read 'this is my life'. I've just been too busy lately to read ANY new fanfics, but I make exceptions for you because I love your stuff. see you soon sweety!

Oh that's right, I almost forgot... ^_^

You fucking BASTARD! you hurt my bishie! I'll teach YOU some respect!

Cody Strikes Yami on the base of the head with a heavy blunt object, instantly knocking him unconscious. Lashes him to the backyard wall spread eagle, very close to a fire ant hill and binds his balls and dick tightly in an ace bandage with chunks of ice against the skin. As Yami wakes up from the pain she carves "Defeated King" into his chest with a rusted razorblade before carving detailed geometric patterns all over his flesh, taking EXTRA care on the palms of the hands, soles of the feet and face. She then douses him with a bucket of salted ice water (The salt melts the ice but it retains its temperature and the salt burns like hell) before taking up a thick rubber whip and dealing so many harsh blows to his stomach that he throws up. (stomach acid also doesn't feel very nice on open wounds) takes the butcher knife Yugi dropped and sodomizes the putrid pharaoh with the sharpened blade, puncturing colon and small intestines, Pours a trail of honey over Yami directly to the ant hill, removes the blade, then walks away to leave him to die from blood loss, blood poisoning, infection, and being eaten alive by fire ants.
schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I know my last review was ubberly long, so from now on, I will do reviews in fives. It' been awhile since I've reviewed, and thusly, I can't remember which was the last chapter I reviewed XD. Hope I don't repeat, or miss anything.

Story 16: I really liked how Yuugi manipulated Yami an used his pent-up sex drive against him. Hilarious and interesting way to end the story lol.
Story 17: I really enjoyed this one. I'm a sucker for SetoxJoey. Lol I'm surprised Seto didn't absolutely kill Yami and Yuugi for interupting him and Joey, too bad you ended it before they got into a foursome.
Story 18: SetoxRyou is one the more interesting pairings I've read, and I've come to like it. Lol I could feel the rage coming off of Seto when he found out Bakura was there, almost like he wanted to break the bed posts to get free and strangle him. And kinky, Ryou liking Bakura watching, I like kinky...
Story 19: Lol Ok that, I did not see coming. I've always imagined Yuugi to be the obedient little uke. Kudos for making him seme with Yami.
Story 20: Lol This one was just plain hilarious. If it weren't for the fact that Ryou had those big chocolate eyes, that no one could say no to, especially when they were tear filled, I think he would have rather slid down a razor into a pool of lemon juice, then rolled around in some salt for a few hours then wear that stupid hat and ring that stupid bell, and certainly would prefer that painful expercience to dressing up like that and making money for someone else LOL. Then Mariku got forced into it...Aww...I do so love seeing the big bad yamis forced into servitude by their hikaris.

Ok, so I really loved this batch of stories, off to read another batch and review. Loves!!!
schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't think reviewing at 4:30-5 in the morning is such a wise idea...especially when it feels like my eyes are bleeding slightly... But here goes anyway.

Story 21: This one I absolutely loved. A threesome between Seto, Seth, and Joey!!! It's like my ultimate yaoi dream...Hot boys and hot sex, what's not to love?
Story 22: There really isn't enough TristanxDuke content out there. I really liked how the whole Dungeon Dice Monsters battle between Duke and Yuugi was a farce so Duke could be friends with everyone. Lol That part where Yuugi walked in was particularly amusing, and it almost seemed like Yuugi knew what was going on. Really loved it because I really like the TristanxDuke pairing.
Story 23: Ooo dark...and twisted. I do loves me a twisted and dark Bakura...but I guess he's usually like that isn't he? Lol Anyway, loved it all the same, blood play is fun.
Story 24: When I read the title I knew this one was going to be good...And Pegaus as the host...BEEP! Bakura rocks, that is all I have to say.
Story 25: It always seems that there is some sort of loathing or revolting, or otherwise something at least one of them do not want to do when Bakura and Mariku are involved lol. Awww, that was so sweet, and Mariku is an evil genius, a very hot and sexy evil genius. One of the best Valetines stories I've read. So Cute and hot!!! Wow, that's kind of a hard combination to get isn't it? Cute AND hot? You must have mad skilz.

Ok sign me up for the mailing list for this story, and any others you feel like sending me: Okumiya-sanAndShigure-kun@hotmail.com I really don't care if people see my email lol.

I am reeeaaaalllyyy behind on your stories...but you see the problem is, that if I start, I just won't stop, and then...then it ends up being about 6 or 7 in the morning and I have fanfiction overload, which of course the only cure for it to read MORE fanfiction. Vicious cycle isn't it? There's almost 20 more of these that I need to read, but since it's almost 6 in the morning I should probably go to bed, or play some more Harvest Moon. Damn that game is addicting... Anyway, I think I'll read some more of your fics against my better judgement, whom I keep locked in a closet lol. Oh the eye bleeding/hurting thing stopped, guess fanfiction cures that too, who knew?
schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How about Yami/Seto Uke Seto please Thank you.