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by nikki7716

schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omg...hot Hot HOTT!!! I loved this one SOOOO MUCH!
I loved how Ryou was domination Bakura, even though he wasn't even having the sex.
And the prayer at the end added to how crazy absurd the whole sexy session was.
I've been missing the fucking and you brought it back deliciously.
Thank you.
=)
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
XD Can't BREATHE! ok I am totally 5000% in LOVE with Ryou like this and WHOOHOO to Uke Bakura! this was hot, hilarious and super special sexy! THANK YOU!
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Uh...OK...Funny that this should happen when you're supposed to have dinner with your friends. Although I have to admit, Bakura just don't do being uke. I can't reli imagine him be uke. His demeanour screams SEME~! Lol! It's OK, I guess the person requesting you to write this has a thing for uke!Bakura ^^
schedule March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HAPPY EASTER TO YOU TOOOOO!!!!!! As for your chapter...............Love it....Love it....Love it... Yayeeee Yami/Yugi/Bakura. Yayeeeee Semme Yugi, Uke Bakura and no Ryou, can't get more perfect than that!!!!!! Going to read it again. Enjoy London. Later.
person Wicabeth
schedule March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was extremely hot and Ryou and Bakura's relationship made me giggle.

Oh, and I think the word you were looking for is 'gills'. At least, that's how I've always know the expression.
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wohoo~! A nice Egyptian setting with an uncommon pairing, although I still prefer SetoxJoey though, but the smex here is definitely tantalizing. Mmm... Boy smex! Gotta love 'em!
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
SQUEE! Ooooh I loved this one sooooo much! yay yay yay! and yes, actual ice cream and ice cream toppings: sprinkles, cookies, candy, fruit, chocolate, caramel, whipped cream, cherries... nuts :P although I'm sure Yugi would have a very yaoi version of a 'banana split' that he'd LOVE to try!
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I bow to you, this was SOOOO SOOOOOO sexy! They actually make a good pair! devilish little thieves! awesome awesome awesome!
person Wicabeth
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hrm, haven't read this pairing before. I enjoyed it.
person Kaitlyn
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
darn i was all jumpy when they started kissing.
i was all "ooooooohhhhhh! after coma sex!"
maybe im weird but that is the first thing i'd want to do after getting out of a coma.
:)