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for A Series of One Shots

by nikki7716

schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woot woot woot!
I was hesitant about the pairing...
BUT! As usual you made it HOTT!
Lol. Awesome story! Can't wait till the next one.
=)
person Void
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can you do a Noa/Mokuba, Malik/Mokuba, Malik/Ryou, and/or a Yami/Mokuba? Put anything you like in it, if you want, just for some variety.
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey can you do one of Noa and Mokuba(he's the uke) and make Seto ketch them going at it thanks
schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL, no they had to stop before poor Ry and Baku got any. That's what Baku gets for falling behind. LOL

That was great!! Please try to do them again. I am surethat is very difficult. i just wrote my 1st man smex scene myself. I was told het is harder but at least there you can use different pronouns. Really, between two guys or more there areonly so many descriptive ways to address each and be able to differenciate so the reader knows who's doing what. I wanted to rip my hair out. LOL

Excellent as always :)

Cassie
schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Seto X baku in ancient Egypt, hmm.. sounds great. How about malik and Thief King Baku?? And you can throw in Ry as the poor slave they found. lol Mwahahaha I'msick.. I know. BUT did ya notice there was no Rex or weevil in that mix at all.eww. LOL

I'm sorry I can't go there. Still. lol
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was funny.
Nice to have a silly one every once in a while.
*jumps up and down*
An ancient Egypt fic with Bakura and Seto!
I am sooooo haaaaappy you're doing it.
I love the coupling and ancient Egypt fics.
Cannot wait for that one!
=D
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor Jounouchi! He's gonna get a very stiff...um lecture! yeah lecture! and poor Dark Magician and Celtic Guardian not getting to finish! Oh well, I'm sure Seto will give him PLENTY of one on one instruction! ^_^

Well I forget just what I reques-...never mind I just remembered. Anyways, I have decided that I want you to give me... A shrubbery! XD Just kidding. (And if you aren't a Monty Python fan you won't even GET that... -_-' god's I'm SUCH a dork...) I've had a weeee bit too much sugar today (See WAY too much) and well, I'm a bit nuts right now...

So anyway, Pairing Request! It's a nice day for a... White Wedding! I wanna see Ryou getting married to someone! Either Malik, or Bakura, or Seto, your choice! and here's the kicker, he somehow managed to wait until his wedding night to lose his virginity. (Don't ask me how he could have possibly said 'no' to any one of these three for the duration of their relationship and have them actually accept it, it's your story. Have Fun!
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi ya! Miss me? The only thing sillier than this pairing (Dark Magician/Celtic Guardian) is Seto/Joey, how appropriate that you ended on that note. Well at least you included Yami/Yugi. Ya know I look for any excuse to read your work for more then your authors notes and review replies(lol). Thanks for sharing. Later.
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was hilarious. Poor Seto, his gaming technology has been abused and he has a retarded puppy on his hands now. "Take your clothes off first." Joey would put that in his notes! xD
I thought all of Yuugi's advice was quite amusing, but it's probably best if Jou stays away from it anyway.

"Well that was because--holy cow! Look at the size of that thing!"
xD So funny.
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and your bookshelf looks awesome. :D