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Oi, I can't wait for another chapter of this. I really like your writing style. Though it's kind of annoying simply because I want to read more. Lol ^^. I wish I could like add this to my favourites like you can on FFN but I will just have to keep remembering to check it. ^^ Look forward to more from this one.

Sweet i liked that one

Okay I'm going to flog, rack, then draw and quarter Bakura slowly, and damnit I know how to do it too! I don't assist with a working replica torture exhibit at renfairs and not know how to cause some freaking pain! You better run Bakura, before I catch and kill you. stay away from my Ryou chan and let him be happy!

Bakura has too much control over Ryou's life. T_T Poor Ryou, but it's not like Ryou can just lock the door and shove Marik out a window when Bakura rolls around. I don't imagine it's easy to lock a thief out of places. At least Ryou and Marik had some more contact this chapter.

This says 'complete' that had just better mean you've gotten the rest of the chapters written, because there's NO WAY you can leave off THERE! update again!

I want to kiss and hug and squeeze the life out of Ryou. But I have the feeling several people would come at me with sharp pointy objects. -Scoots away from Bakura, the crazy blonde Egyptians, and everyone else who wants to get in Ryou's pants during fanfiction.-

D: This chapter was sad. Bakura's so mean, he's ruining Ryou's chances. And dammit, Marik, don't cut off your sentences half-way through telling Ryou how he'd be treated if he were yours! Just make him yours! God. Ryou needs looooooove~.
It's days like these that I feel Yami needs to come along and shove Bakura off a cliff. x; These days don't come all that often, though.

Aw. D: Poor Ryou's just lonely and in need of some love~. I'm glad at least SOMEONE is half-way decent to him, and the fact that the someone is one that Ryou likes, well, that's just all the better. The kids needs someone to pay attention to him every once in awhile.

Raar. This one got me thinking again about how Ryou doesn't have any real friends. I always feel bad for him when it comes to that. Oh well, Marik at least spoke to him, that's a good way to get things going. :3

I wanna smack everyone else who is tormenting or ignoring my favorite bishie! PLEASE update soon!

You have me crying!
that was so...beautiful.
i loved it so much and if i could favorite it i would

Great writing! BAkura was a complete ass in this one>.< heheh he should be somtimes though. Still I was sad Marik died.
J-chan