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this is sooo well written. I'm trying to write a story somewhat similar to yours. is it okay if I use a bit of your dialogue?

I'm going to have...
many,
many,
MANY,
nightmares about this one.
This was expertly written,
and wonderfully described...
Thus the nightmares, LOL.
=D

holy shit on a shit sandwich o O that must have been the most disturbing thing I've ever read lol loved it though ;)

... Scarred for life.

I don't know why I read that. It was just so horrifying I couldn't tear my eyes from the screen. That was just wrong in so many ways. *shudders* flaps of wrinkly skin... *shudders again*

As for writing quality though, you did a good job. I daresay Yugi's horror was well communicated.

Keep up the good work!

~Angel

wow that was creepy and weird.
but well written. very good.

O_O okay... erm, well, since ive never ever seen such a disgusting pairing (lol i think you win mate!), it would be interesting to see the fic continued. BUT PLEASE GOT NO MORE LEMONS!!! *_* SPARE US, SPARE US!!! You could maybe mention taht it was still happening and put in yugi's thoughts and his struggles with it. Maybe he could try to keep it secret but it becomes obvious to his friends at school that something is wrong... they could walk in on it happening, and you could do all the drama and angst that would ensue. Guilty friends and Atemu? Courthouses and tears? It would be very intersting to read. I know this fic hasn't been updated in a while, so I'd be surprised if you responded, but if you plan to continue the story (cause it seems pretty much unresolved) could you email me? Thanks! xx