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August 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
There is not much I can say here. Your writing is very sensitve and sensual but not ... you know ... low.
But this story is bound to be one of my favorites.
Just know I liked it very much.
But this story is bound to be one of my favorites.
Just know I liked it very much.
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April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear. Yuugi is definitely in for some struggles.
Wonderful writing. Very original.
Keep up the good work!
~Angel
Wonderful writing. Very original.
Keep up the good work!
~Angel
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December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good story. It could be a chaptered story. I loved it.
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December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Snerk * Yugi's family are a bunch of prudes, but this was a good oneshot, thanks for the smile!
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November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was so cute and adorable! I love the way you make atemu refer to yugi as a child..it just sorts of makes me wonder what their difference inage ius? anywyas..is there going to be a sequel..i would like that very much. Great job writing this! Take care!
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November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was so cute and adorable! I love the way you make atemu refer to yugi as a child..it just sorts of makes me wonder what their difference inage ius? anywyas..is there going to be a sequel..i would like that very much. Great job writing this! Take care!
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November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This definately made me smile. The banter between the two of them was just so funny I couldn't help myself. It stands well on its own, but there's definately a lot of ways it could be continued into a longer story... but seeing as how Carry On and the Garden are getting pushed back for other things, maybe it's best to leave this one here. :) Seriously though, I love reading your stories, and you MIGHT just be enough to drag me back to FF.net. As much as I've come to hate that site, it would be worth it to sort through the rest of your archive.
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November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was fun to read as is. But, you know, you could make it a whole story, out of that idea. Or is it, perhaps, just wishful thinking, on my part. Oh never mind (just musing). Great piece, none the less.
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November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was really neat, you have a really interesting view here!
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November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My I just say this. Damn your good. I have read one of your works before but you should add to this one. Make it a story (what am I saying it is a story... okay a longer story then). It is just to good to leave off where you did. Places do more for it I would really like to see it happen.