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November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!!!!!!! Were is Mokuba? I hope you make him around 9 or 10. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just read chapter 2 and loved it. Loved the smug bastardness. Keep up the good work. Update soon.
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October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this. Glad I found it. I love the way it is going.
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October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I remember reading this on MediaMiner.org and every time I wanted to reread it, I couldn't find it or remember the name of it. I love it! You seriously must continue with it! Please, oh, please! Please update soon!
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October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow this sounds really good. hope you update soon.
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October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!
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October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It has more drama than I usually read, but I am intrigued by it. I think it is a promising story and will look forward to reading more of it. Keep working on it.