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er, did Yami mean to call Yugi "little sister"? The correct Japanese word for little BROTHER is "otouto," which is similar but obviously not the same.

Poor Yami. I think he and Bakura would make a great couple. Too bad Seto is in the way. He seems to have mixed feelings. He doesn't want Yami but doesn't want anyone els to have him either. It will be interesting to see what happens.

Ack! Now that you've gotten me hooked, I have to wait for you to write again!!! I hope you're a regular updater - waiting for story chapters is a pain. Anywho, I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes.

OMG This is soooo funny, cept for that part where Seto had to dump Joey. That was SAD. Sad...Very sad... But the funny came back after I read chapter two. Lol Yami is soooo emo, and Yuugi rocks. Oh and LOL Pegasus is their principal. Surprised the whole school isn't corrupt lol. LOVES LOVES LOVES!!!

I've had days like Yami where god just took too much pleasure in screwing me over. I was in Japan last August staying in Kyoto, and I was going to Kobe for a day, but I forgot my umbrella, which I was so knew I needed, but I had a train to catch and the sky was clear so yeah. Anyway, I went book shopping, well overboard on book shopping. I just about died from how many books I bought. My train back to Kyoto wasn't due for oh another hour and a half, but I couldn't go anywhere with so many books so I went back to the station and waited for my train. And waited and waited...and waited...But the train never came. It was almost two hours late. I was so worried I missed my train, but FINALLY it came, and I got back to Kyoto. I got out of the station and caught a bus, but then it started to rain...and I had books, and forgot my umbrella... When I finally got back to my dorm, I wanted to die I was so tired and so pissed.

Okay, back on point. I LOVE YOUR STORY. Love it love it love it love it. I haven't read past chapter two but I JUST had to give you a review, this story rocks so much. Lol you should make it a threesome between SetoxYamixJou. Ha, no you should totally do what you want, but that would still be awesome. I LOVES THIS STORY!!!

Great plot and twists and your characterizations are priceless!

Loving this! Can't wait for more!

'Ko

looking good. can't wait to see what happens next.

good story but i think it needs alot more drama on yami's part and angst on seto's part. i also think its only right that since seto's still seeing joey that yami should get to flirt and kiss up to someone to. even when they get married and seto's still with jou than yami should have someone also its only far.

Good chapter. I love it. Poor Yami and Seto engaged to each other and hating it.

Good chapter. Sparks should fly soon. Yami is going to have a fit. Too bad he and Seto can't work together and get out of this.

I think if Yami finds out about Seto and Jou, he might just try to convince Jou to marry Seto, hurry up and do that so Yami can get out of marrying Seto himself. Eh. But I hope not, all the same. XP

Oh god. Are they gonna corrupt Mokuba? Pleeeease tell me they're gonna corrupt Mokuba. xD