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for Carry On

by Oceans11

schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Standing ovation* Wonderful series and a satisfying ending.
schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Glad it was completed. Thanks for writing. Later.
schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I loved it.
person Hello
schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, that was adorable! Thank you for such a wonderful fic. :D Happy endings are love. :)
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow...It feels like i'm watching a movie ^_^ So much drama and twists
schedule June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Honda was an ass. I hope he can live with it. Good chapter.
schedule June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update! Great chapter. Waiting to see what you have in store. Later.
schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I gotta say, I am waiting eagerly for the next chapter. I was next to tears with the confrontation between father/son and brother/brother. And to love someone without being able to help, poor Yugi! Please continue, I can hardly wait.
person Syke
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
>>Because this wasn’t the end of things, and as far as he was concerned, the situation was only going to get worse from here.

WHAT?! Nuuuuu...dammit, it's already so bad, how's it going to get worse?! ;_; Waaaah! *sniffle *

I admit it, I actually nearly cried during this chapter 'cuz of Mazin. Well, more so because of Atemu's suffering, but Mazin, with the whole "little river" thing? That cut pretty deep into my sappy side.

Dammit, this CANNOT get worse. NU. I REFUSE...to...believe it even though I can't do anything if it does. =( Waaah! *goes off to wait for the next chapter *

Nice job on updating so quickly, btw.
person Syke
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...OMGOSH YOU UPDATED AGAIN SO SOOOOOOOOOOOON!

I luff you. ^-^

And I cooed, grinned, 'awww'ed and made other girly, somewhat embarrassing (not that I really care) noises over Atemu and Yuugi's moment there, with the 'question' that was never asked. I laughed, a lot, over Sarah's jesting/mental picture of Yuugi being condemned to the couch. And I applaud you in answering so many of Yuugi's questions in one single scene without an actual conversation. =3 Bravo. I didn't mind the short chapter at all as I care a lot more for quality than quantity...(though, I admit, only reading 50 words of even the greatest story even written wouldn't be all that fulfilling) but I am MORE than happy to allow you to "make up for it." =D *Looking forward to the next installment *