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Good chapter. I think they have found what they were missing in their previous sexual encounters. I hope their family doesn't find out.

Hi Ocean!! Im blueberry90 from ff.net and I don't know what to say about that story but I think I liked that and you should know Im willing to read all kind of story you write(of course they must be about Atem and Yugi :D)

I really like your writing style! And I love those two together! I just don't know if I can read this one all the way through. Not due to the incest or anything. Although in the real world I don't care for it, this is only a story and a great starting one at that. I just have major issues with Christianity as a whole. It has a lot to do with my upbringing and the whole "thou shalt do what I say and not what I do" thing. Great start, and I promise to try to read it!