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Yugi is sweet giving a confession like that...haha. I love this couple and Im so glad I found this story, good job writing this! Looking forward to more! :)

O_O! SO. FUCKIN. HOT! Dear gods woman, it was a simple blow job and you got me bothered! Oh man, I'm gonna be in real trouble when they finally have sex together...can't wait. :D

Wow! That was fun to read. Love AtemuXYugi. Keep writing, please.

WOW!!! I mean really WOW!!!!!I love that chapter.It was really well written.I loved yami and yuugi's feelings for each other plz update soon Im looking forward for the next chap. see you later ;D

This is a great story...done quite well...its alway a little daunting doing an incest story and having it come out well and people liking it...have you by chance read Catacombs of Sin by Lechan?...you would like it...catti

This is soo amazing!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Oh, wow, and wow again. I love the twins twist (hehehe) and the difference in looks. I can so see Atemu with curly hair, and *ooooh* is it nice. I don't know what I expected, but this damn well goes above and beyond. It's erotic, yet detached at some level. Sensual, with just that wonderful side of reality and thought-process that most fics lack. I admit to reading waaay more of these type fics, but this is just wonderful. I love the imagry of the migranes, it makes me think that you suffer from them too, just because the details are something that many would pass over.

All in all, this is probably one of my favorite Ocean works, well written (as always) and so hawt. Oh so freaking hot. Keep it up, I've favorited it, so I'll be checking! I havent gotten to the two new chapters on ffnet, but I'll get there soon! I've put them off again, in favor of finishing my paper for history- I put it off till the last minute as usual, but it's half my grade, so I figured I better do well, ne?

Molto benissimo, mi buon'amica!

I KNEW I recognized your writing style! and I really like this story so far, I can't wait for you to post more. will you e-mail me when you do? my email is Emeraldfairy18 @ hotmail. com (Remove spaces)

That was great!! You write beautifully!

Good chapter. I really like this. So far I really love all your stories.