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I'm sure u notice this already but u missed one chapter for this story which u posted on fanfiction long ago.

will there be male preg in this story?

awww, love the chap, and glad to see you're back with the fic

Aww, this chapter was so adorable and sweet! I hope things don't get too bad for them...Anyways, Thanks so much for the update, I was so happy when I sa w another chapter had been added. I really enjoyed reading this chapter, keep up the geat work! Lol...I can't wait to read more, I'm so impatioent..8D

u update, yay!!!!!!!!! It has been forever. Plz don't make us wait this long next time.

Loved it. The lemon was great. Of course, Yugi is worried about Ryou. He, being who he is could do nothing else. I hope he can just be happy. Ryou needs to be okay, he deserves to be happy, too.

AH! no more chapaters,**bounces around**so wanna read more! damn you its like crack!
J-chan

okay this is bugging me... you make yugi and ryou out to be complete girls, and, well, THEY'RE NOT. This is a very well written fic in that it flows and the imagery is fantastic, but the characterisation is honestly terrible. They . Are. Not. Women. They. Are. Men. Yeah, some guys are more feminine than others, but seriously, you even wrote, 'You will always be the EMPRESS of my heart.' ???? 'EMPRESS'??? Yami sleeps with the guy, you think he'd at least be able to tell that he had a dick and not a vagina. You use words like 'willowy' and 'soft' and that image is just so wrong for the men you're writing about. You also make them both out to be complete pussys, thinking about nothing except 'their one true loves'. I know what it feels like to be in love and it can be pretty consuming, but I'm a woman and even I'm not that poetic and whimpy all the time. Just cause Yugi and Bakura are supposed to be the more feminine ones, that doesn't mean that they wouldn't desire to enter their loves bodies' like their loves desire them. Men don't want to be fucked all the time, they want to fuck another too. I'm just saying, perhaps you should be writing in the M/F section? Because this would be an extremely high class fic in that fandom. This is not a flame, BTW, its called constructive criticism, and I really think you need it here. I know I'm a pretty crap writer myself, and don't think I coudl do any better, but there you go. Its probably too far into the story by now to change anything, but please, in any chapters youare writing at present, GIVE THE MEN SOME BALLS AND AN ACTUAL PERSONALITY OF THEIR OWN.

OH, THIS IS GETTING SO GOOD! I can't wait for the next chapter, you're sotry is just so interesting! Please continue writing, I'm looking forward to your next update!

I still stand by the fact that this is an amazing idea, its so nice to see a refreshing, out-of-the-ordinary story! Keep up the awesome work!!!