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for Bloody Halloween 2

by yamiyugi

schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope they figure it out before he strikes. Good chapter.
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. Too bad Yugi didn't know something was going on. He might have woke Yami and not gone alone.
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. I hope they can rescue him.
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. I know Yami will win.
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I figured it out at the end of the first story. And throwing out that clue only confirmed it. Update soon.
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Is this guy sick or what. Playing games with peoples life. I really hope Yami and Kaiba catch this guy. Joey isn't that stupid either he will stick by both Yami and Seto knowing it isn't their fault.
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You would figure Yami would be more watchful than this. Interesting chapter. This is not a flame, but you need to be more careful with the way certain words are being replaced with others. To fix this you should get a beta who could check the mistakes. This is really a great story with a great plot.
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well I guess I will be your first reviewer. First off I really liked your first story. Second I have it narrowed down to two suspects who killed the rest of them. I'm pretty sure I know who did it the clue you gave is so out there its not even funny. Please dont let anyone else die and let this bastard get caught. Update soon.
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I Love it. I hope they get him and beat him.