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April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT! SYHAHH! SO CUTE! ^_^
Love it!
Kuro
Love it!
Kuro
schedule
December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'm pushing the button! Sorry, I can never find a lot to say about poetry. I felt the phrasing was a little weird until I read it out loud. Then, it was beautiful, and started to come alive for me. I really liked it. I'm sorry I don't have anything more interesting to say about it. However, I'm interested enough to go look at more of your work now.
schedule
October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Adorable, sweet, and hot. A lethal combo. I love Puzzleshipping to death and I like this very much. Write more, dear!
--RayeMoon
--RayeMoon
schedule
September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this! I'm not normally a poetry fan, but the way you wrote this was wonderful!
schedule
September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lovely piece of work (as usual). Love Yami/Yugi. True hits/review ratio, at this site, suck (although, it does give authors a great venue for their work) Don't get discouraged, keep on writing.
schedule
September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lovely poem and I really loved the question at the end. Good job.
schedule
September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww, that was cute. Sorry I haven't been on in so long...issues! And I definitely understand about the couple of reviews for hundreds of readers. Just had to drop in, since the content had to do with 2 of my fav, sexy little bishies. Good job. Later