rate_review Reviews

I love this.. I want to read more.. Good Work! ^_^

Well... I liked the ending a lot! Still, I feel like you could have done so much more with this than you did. It felt kind of rushed. That's not to say it's bad, by any means. It wasn't bad at all. I actually really enjoyed it, don't get me wrong. It's just that I think you have the talent, and I know you have the idea to make this unforgettable instead of just good. More details, more description. You took a moment that was clearly quite painful for Yugi, and seemed to skim over a lot of it. Even after saying all that, the very last paragraph really got to me. It was a perfect finish in my mind.

I loved it! Will there be more! This is a great take on the DOOM saga angst! LOVED IT!!

Love,
Silver

PLEASE UPDATE SOON SO I CAN READ MORE!!!!!

ASOTA

Are you going to continue this? I would like to read this whole thing!

Nice piece of work. Keep on writing.