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August 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like this one even if I'm still unsatisfied because I want to know why they were seperated and ... you know ... the backround-story.
However, your style of writing is really good, sesetive and sensual at the same.
However, your style of writing is really good, sesetive and sensual at the same.
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October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fluff is an integral part of every diet!! I need fluff. LOL
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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Go read the plot bunny that only let me get three hours of sleep so my insomnia will have some meaning. I know it's not actually part of the story, but seeing as it's 4:30 in the morning for me now, it made me laugh... anyways! I loved this. I'm such a sucker for fluff, it's not even funny. I personally didn't think any of them were out of character at all. Just what they would be like if they weren't off saving the world every day. I especially loved the bartender. It's really rare for fanfiction to have good original characters. You did it really well though. And my favorite part of the whole thing was how he drank the shot every night just to remind himself of Bakura... AWWWW!
P.S. ONLY three? My goodness, it's nice to know there are people out there still that are dedicated to editing! But I definately think you caught everything. Great job.
P.S. ONLY three? My goodness, it's nice to know there are people out there still that are dedicated to editing! But I definately think you caught everything. Great job.
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November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a great story. Very mysterious but I'm glad they found each other again.
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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love this
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September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so OMG.I almost cried you should write more stories like this.My heart is aching.
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September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. I really like the Bartender POV. It was sweet and refreshing. Good job!
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September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like what you did here, with having the bartender be the narrator. Great fic!
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September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What an interesting perspective this tale was told from! They were apart for six years? Wow... the whole mystery as to why Ryou and Bakura were separated in the first place lingers on... Whatever happened between them isn't even the point, the point was that Ryou wanted Bakura back and was certain that Bakura would come back to him and find him - somehow the club (well, a club) was important to them. I liked the fact that Ryou danced alone and wanted no one's company... except for the one he longed for. I loved the fact that Ryou stood up for himself when someone dared to force him to dance... a strong, feisty Ryou is to die for! And the two drinks he ordered... loved the idea and the ultimate significance of the alcoholic half of his usual. The reunion was probably as Ryou had always dreamed it to be... Nice story!