rate_review Reviews

I loved the first chapter. Took me a few minutes to get passed the age of consent but the story really had your magic too it. The second chapter lost the magic. It almost seemed to be authored by someone else. Though yami and yugi repeatedly mention why the owe seto, it is never brought out why. Also, since jou was a big part of chapter one and the reason for seto getting punished neither he or his sister or parents are mentioned again. Instead in walks dead Noah. I think you need a chapter three to explain chapter two, especially since the jounouchi men also want a piece of gozaboro.

Hmmm, this is good stuff! You make the relationship mechanics work beautifully, especially the Seto/Yami/Yugi 3some.
I love your writing. ^_^x

~jea

I liked this! took me an hour to read it, but i liked it XD

I really like the Seto-Yami-Yugi/Yugi-Mokuba angle :) Lovely.

I love it! This is a different way to look at the group of friends. I hope they can do something about Gozaburo soon though. I'm glad the Shadow Dragons were there to help.

Good chapter. I'm glad Gozaburo is history. I hope Noah will be better. He needs Seto. They need to work together and get things done. Great story.

Very good!! I dodn't think I would like it but after reading the first few paragraphs I got sucked in. I'm a huge Jou fan but I lie how you're managing to suck me into the seto parts too. This pairing is great!! It's nice to see the kind of Honda. Luckily I read your author page so I won't beg for a quick update, I'll guess I'll see it when I see it.