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I LOVE JOEY'S GRANDMA!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
I want one of those!!!

And the problem Seto has, the "pup-MUTT"!!!!! I was laughing so hard because of that. Geez, so cool!

UPDATE SOON!

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I like a smart Joey...its different
update soon!

Well, I have to say, I am seriously enjoying this. Its well written and the concept... definitely an original one. And you are writing it well too, your descriptive pieces are lovely. I can't wait for the next installment.

Wow! I like the plot...Can't wait to see the reaction of Seto when he will dicover the true identity of Jou. Update!!!!!!!!

It's a very interesting idea, and I really like your writing style and your plot development. The fact you made Jounouchi have a secret identity was just all kinds of fun, and The Ferocious Echidna had me rolling, but I'm sorry, I think the private subway between his mansion and 'Joey Wheeler's house' is a bit too over the top. The permits for it alone would have been a dead give away. And I know I'm making too much out of a piece of fiction, but it's just my opinion, and I will be back to read more when you post again.

OMG!!! That was wonderful it's been a while I've read a Seto/Joey story with some actual plot ^_^
I've been stuck in oneshots lately so this is really great to see. Please update as soon as you can.

update soon i must know how seto reacts to joey being the CEO update NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please and thankyou