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for Pedigree Pup

by Apythii

schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haha! Joey'grandma is really weird but I like her^^ because she is helping indirectly Seto and Jou getting together. I wonder how Seto is gonna handle his deal. This story is getting better and better. Please update!
person loopdiz
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
~*~*This chapter was nice! Is there Mpreg in this fic??!! If so, Then you are a FRIKKING GENIUS and I LOVE YOU!XD I hope chapter 5 is as "HOT" as you said it is gonna be:)~*~*

UPDATE VERY VERY SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!


~*~*loopdiz~*~*
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm, thoroughly enjoying your story and really looking forward to the next chapter.

'Ko
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WHAT A CLIFFIE! YOU MUST UPDATE!! Yay! I'm really excited! Poor Jou^^ he passed almost half the day "disguising" himself because of Seto...and it didn't work^^'... yeah Seto will recognize his puppy anywhere^^ I wonder if Jou is gonna deny that and continue to pretend that he is someone else and if Seto is gonna be convinced. Please update soon! This is really interesting!
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hiya's!! just want to say your doing a good job on this story! its different but in a good way! s/j are my favorite pairs!! ^^ i ended up making an account just to review the few stories i've read & liked so much!! (this being one of them!!) please keep on cont' this fic would love to see how they develop later on!! thanx!
person loopdiz
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
~*~*Love IT! AWESOME FANIFC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE VERY SOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!^^~*~*
PS. Joey's grandma PWNS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!XD LOVE HER!!!!!!!lol


~*~*loopdiz~*~*
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, the last two chapters have been much better than the first one (In my opinion) I only had to get a few sentences into the lemon before going 'Hey wait a minute! They are both in WAY too much denial to be taking things that far yet!' But it was still a REALLY REALLY good dream! Joey moving in with Seto's gonna be a real blast, can't wait, be back to read more soon!
person flukes
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
One of these days I will learn how to review successfully... Maybe.

Great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next. And I love Joey's Grandma. Oh, if I had a Grandma like that... I would probably be more crazy than I am. ^^
person flukes
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thought I'd reviewed, but it seems I haven't... But if three reviews show up, don't blame me!

I really like this fic. I always have some issues with there being original and dub names, but this makes it work. There is one small thing bothering me though. Why are they learning the quadratic formula when they are EIGHTEEN? Make it the volume of a curve rotated around some arbitrary line. Please? For me? Because the smarter they are, the better looking. 'Tis true!

Keep up the wonderful writing, and feel free to completely ignore me. ^^V
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow... Jou in Seto's house...interesting^^ and can't wait to see what will happen in the business party now that Jou is stuck in Seto's house. Please update soon!