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February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I swear, if this turns into another Mpreg story, I'll be very disappointed. I was expecting a stronger Jou, but I guess not. When I read the first chapter I had hope that with Jou's secret would come a more confident seme personality. *sigh* Seto has the upper hand in the relationship yet again.
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February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY! update! update! hooray hooray hooray! I love this story!
What I wanna see is Seto backing Jou against a wall, not in a threatening way, but gently, one step at a time, and just leaning in and giving Jou a kiss that just melts him to the point Kaiba has to hold him up and he STILL sinks to the ground. that's what I wanna see!
What I wanna see is Seto backing Jou against a wall, not in a threatening way, but gently, one step at a time, and just leaning in and giving Jou a kiss that just melts him to the point Kaiba has to hold him up and he STILL sinks to the ground. that's what I wanna see!
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February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story.
Poor Jou^^ but I like to see him confused like that because of Seto.
I hope that he will finally accept the feelings that he has toward Seto. But I wonder when? maybe he needs to get drunk again^^
Can't wait to see what is the decision that he decided to take. I hope that he will not try to escape but face his feelings.
Poor Jou^^ but I like to see him confused like that because of Seto.
I hope that he will finally accept the feelings that he has toward Seto. But I wonder when? maybe he needs to get drunk again^^
Can't wait to see what is the decision that he decided to take. I hope that he will not try to escape but face his feelings.
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February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for not hurting our little dragon...
And great update my dear..Joey is finally coming to understand his feelings...now if we can just get him locked in a room with Seto...
And great update my dear..Joey is finally coming to understand his feelings...now if we can just get him locked in a room with Seto...
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January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
~*~*OMG!!! YAY!!! You FINALLY updated!! i was DYING without this story:( Very kool chappie!!! I loved the lime in it especially;)XD!!!!!! Keep Up the Good WORK!!! UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!~*~*
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January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness. The BEST review? Let me see...
The best review I can give you is to say you are truly gifted and talented. Beyond that you are skilled and meticulous in your format and structure. I enjoy your work immensely because it tells a good story and does it in a well written, thoughtful manner that uses language arts appropriately. The details you include are rich and add texture to your story. Your Original Characters are fun, and I suspect a little bit of you having a lark.
Thank you for sharing the story with us.
Maggiemay
The best review I can give you is to say you are truly gifted and talented. Beyond that you are skilled and meticulous in your format and structure. I enjoy your work immensely because it tells a good story and does it in a well written, thoughtful manner that uses language arts appropriately. The details you include are rich and add texture to your story. Your Original Characters are fun, and I suspect a little bit of you having a lark.
Thank you for sharing the story with us.
Maggiemay
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January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH holy crap! You can't leave off there!! SETO! Nooo! be okay! please be okay! I loved this chapter, the second Jou started in on his plan of getting free from Seto I saw EXACTLY where that was going! hooray! poor mokuba, I think he's been slightly warped, but only in a good way, everyone should be exposed to a great deal of good Yaoi! I'll take some more too please! I'm so glad you updated, please do so again soon!
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January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!! update soon please!!!^-^
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November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Me Lovey, now you writey!
If you no write i no read!
More constructive critisism in adjacent with progress of story! Yay!
If you no write i no read!
More constructive critisism in adjacent with progress of story! Yay!
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October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this story. You should have put more to that last chapter. It would of been funny to see what may have happen other wise. But the way you did it was just great on its own. So no harm done in the end. I would love to see more of this story ASAP. It really is a great thought to have when it comes to this story.