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October 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Please keep it going. And keep up the eccentric nature of Seto Kaiba. That's why he's one of my fav characters. There's just something about a rich man with cool, hi-tech toys. (Case in point; the Blue-Eyes White Dragon Jet from the series). And I thought the magnet lock was a nice touch.
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February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
... if you don't continue this... I may have to hunt you down *shakes fist* Please update!!
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August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
holy crap that lemon was HOT! noooo! don't leave off there! 40 reviews?! from THIS site?! Oh man... if I leave 20 will it still count? I want MORE! you CAN'T just leave off there, it's way too good! I love it I love it I love it! please give us more!
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August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow I clicked into this story about 3 hours ago and I must say I am extremely happy that I did. This story has been highly entertaining to read. I love how crazy Joey's grandma is, and she must be extremely nimble to have gotten through Seto's bedroom traps. I am looking forward to when Joey relies his acting skills didn't fool Kaiba for very long if at all. Hope to see a update soon, I shall review again if I am logged on to my account at the time (I'm extremely lazy mostly but thought that this was defiantly worth logging in and reviewing.
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July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so on suggestion i decided to read your story for the first time and i must say it cracked me up. Your descriptions were beautiful. Your random parts with the grandmother didn't hinder the plot but oddly added to it. I hope you continue. I also hope Seto and Jou end up making love in the rain. With Jou's love of the rain and the thought of two dripping wet boys makes for a beautiful scene in my mind. Oh if you are still looking for a beta i'll be happy to help. Anyway LOVED the story.
firelilly
firelilly
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July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok I just started chapter one but I had to review and point out that...If his mother's side is the rich owners of 'jounouchi Corp.' there's something wrong. Jounouchi is his father's last name, not his mothers, making it his father's side of the family that should be the rich ones. Though you probably already know that and I am just nit-picking. Lol sorry, it's good thus far though.
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July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok, i apologize, I hadn't read far enough to see that you explained the names. My fault. Sorry....
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June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
... *laughs uncontrollably* Between Grandma and Seto's sweet tooth, I think I'm going to be chuckling all day <3 lol
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June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think...only Joey would memorize the taste of his couch XD lol That's not your couch hun, its a sexy beast that can nail your ass <3 lol
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June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww, Joey hurt Seto and is feeling bad about it. Well... I don't think Seto is against using guilt as part of his arsenal to get Joey into bed XD lmao Great job Joey, give Seto some ammo~!!! XD lol