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for A Dark Chance.

by LaniReaper

person amanda1
schedule February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update soon cause I wanna see (hopefully) somebody kick that girl's butt
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HUUU????? Ok I was loving this story, sure im worried with this little cliffy or what im calling a cliffy, so y would this be the last chapter?????? U cant end a story here!!!! Please tell me ur just having a bad day or something and this isnt really the end of such a great story! .... Pretty please??? ((Big begging fox kit eyes))
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your story is wonderful really, I Really Hope you'll write more chapters...will you? .____.
person cinque
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is sooo good. Love your story.
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for the next chapter!!!
person tavia454
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAHHHHHHHH! damn it! Kaiba ruined a good lemon. What a butthead. Anyways, great chapter! Poor Yugi - he's so confused right now. I'm sure that Yami can overcome that little problem though.
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter!
person tavia454
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh! Sorry, didn't realize this story was back on yesterday. But I found it this morning. Great chappie!
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hurray for lemon juice!!! (lol) i like the direction of your story, i always get so sad when i get to an end of my favorite shows... so i like how this goes on like the series didnt show the true ending! please keep it up (lemons & all!!) & i promise to keep reading!!! ^^
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well as far as following a couple, Yami and Yugi are my favorite (they are the best together i think). Great chapter!!! I can't wait for the next update

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