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for Hold Me Down!

by mcpnoi360

person Anon
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh the plot thickens! I so would love to see more of Jim and Hasselberry though.
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for more! I love this story!
person Kouji
schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm I like alot, now where is the next part? A good balance between the plot and the lemon, and who's the shadow, Aster?
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey your not done yet, keep writing!
person Des Yamimi
schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Finish it... I MUST KNOW! I love Syrus more than chocolate singin' monkeys...Don't you?
person Polly
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
SWEET! Can't wait for more Sy goodness!
person Devils-Advocate3
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm looking forward to know who this mysterious person is who likes syrus as well. ^-~ & personally I love syrus. He's so cute an innocent. IIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE........Sigh.(Blush)Sorry.(Giggle) Can't wait for your update. May it be soon. ^-^ (curtsy)
Kisses ^_~
person Anon
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like it keep up the good work
person ibibi
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!! I'm so happy that there is another JadenxSyrus shipper. Heh Jaden is so sweet at being relieved that Syrus is single. I'm really impressed that you have this story planned and a sequel. Can't wait for the next chapter