rate_review Reviews

WHERE IS SETO??????????????? He can't let Seth take Jou away from him like that!!!!! Please update!!! By the way, BEAUTIFUL story. Great plot. fluent style of writing. And it's getting more and more interesting. I'm really looking forward for next chapter. Don't make us wait for too long!!!!!

YOU MEANIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LEAVING US WITH A CLIFFIE!!!!!!!!!!! MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MMMMMOOOOORRRRREEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Yay! Fast update! :) You've made my day and it's only 8 am! xD Keep up the fast, good writing!

PS: I also love the clever insertion of Phil Collins lyrics. I hope it was intentional. O.o

I LOVE your style of writing... and the way you describe Seto and Jou. These two first chapters are so interesting!!! This story is so great. I'm really beginning to get addicted to it. Can't wait for the next chapter!!! I loved the part of the notes between Jou, Yuugi and Ryou... it's really cool and when Seth was following Jono's ghost...it's so sad. I really feel sorry for them. Anyway, everything was so good... so well written. You re doing a great job with this story. I really wonder how you are able to alternate so well between modern time, ancient time and the dreams. And the many details that you add. It's really very good. Anyway, I hope that we will see next chapter what Seth did and especially how things will ecolve between Seto and Jou. Please continue!!! and update faster!

DAMN..that was pretty good too...so are you going to update soon?...maybe you should enter this in one of the Dragons Lair contests...probably would win...its really good...catti

DAMN....that was awesome!!!!...catti

Gods, I love the intro. I hope for more soon. And Kaiba already doesn't deserve Jou! :P

Update soon!

so sad
please update soon

OMFG SPAZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ! XD

It's... It's.... *speachless....*

*breath in, breat out....* ok... So, I just fell inlove with this fanfic... I mean... it was so... GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD It's been quite some time since a Yu-Gi-Oh! Seto/Jou Seth/Jou fanfic has driven me so crazy!!!!!!!!! I just... I love it! So sad, so beautifull, I feel like kicking Bakura's royal arse!!!!!

I'll be climbing up the walls until you update! So please, please, pretty please with a cherry on top, DON'T TAKE TOO MUCH TIME!!!!!!!!!!! (that's asking for a lot, I know I'm a fanfiction writer as well... so... yeah >.<)

KEEP THIS WONDERFULL PIECE UP!!!!!!!!!!!! lotsa love!