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O.o?!? so confused! did it say this was an ending?!?
J-chan

Continue~ I need to know more of what's happening between Seth, Seto, and Joey. ;-;

Wow!!!! Great story!!! I really can't stop saying that at each review because this story is so incredibly good and well done. I really like how things are evolving. And yay! finally Seto has begun to move to get his puppy. Well I have though that he will stop the kiss between Seth and Jou but at least it made him realize that he likes Jou... And by the way, it was so sweet to see Jou and Seto together in the garden. They really are so cute together^^ I wonder what will happen next. Please update!

Sweet! I sense a love triangle evetually brewing! I love how original this is. I do hope to read more soon.

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good chapter
How about seto/seth fight? or maybe seto/jou/seth ;) ?

Dude! Update this story it is so intense and tear-jerking! Please update, I can't stand cliffhangers! >w<

loving the story its very heart warming and romantic. personally i think that u should keep writing more chapters and have jou stay in egpyt with seth becuz the past seth and the furture jou just seem to fit. i have nothin agaisnt seto but in this story jou and seth should be together becus so many people have missed jono and hes even left behind his younger sister and cousin so i think its only fair that they get a second chance on a happy life with jou. i know that jou future family and friends will miss him but i think they'll understand where jou's heart rightfully belongs.

Cheers for the cliffhanger! Now, we both know that it's both likely AND unlikely for the kiss to happen. Because:

A) It's still too soon in the story to get the smoochies (XD)

B) Someone might come callin' (Seto might be passing by and do a side remark about dogs mating rituals)

C)They are at an open, a perfect place for a kiss. But also a perfect place to get the crowd to go wild (ever imagined what egyptian fangirls might be like?)

D)Bakura might be watching the movement on the palace, and might take the shot to take down the priest (but it's also unlikely considering th fact that they know Jono is dead, so there would be a shock)

E) Jou is still unsure of Seth's aproach. So he would most likely push him away for fear of being used as a replacement.

Whatever happens next depends on the situations later. For example: If Seto were too see what happens, he might go into a berserk kinda mode.

I'll be waiting for more! Hope this little analysis that shows my state of boredome at 2:22 in the morning might help you on something.

UPDATE SOON!

Love your story!
Seto should stop this kiss ;)