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for I Almost Had You

by Hideki LaShae

person codymthomas
schedule December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Whacks Kaiba* You idiot! never never NEVER let society rules your life! You'll be miserable! and you can't get rid of your one true love that easily! BAKA! *whacks Kaiba again* I can't wait for you to update another chapter!
schedule December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww...so sad...but isn't he going to get a big surprise when his puppy follows him home...

well done my lady
person Skyes
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG you have to continue this story...
person Shadow2008
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story ^_^. Although switching back and forth between the present and the future, i dont think time works like that.
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woah haven't seen this in a while, but that meant that I could read a lot of chaps in a row! Very nice. I think I asked this a long time ago but could you send me an email with the web address for this when you add to this? My email is PotionsPet@tidni.com. Thanks!
person smalvina
schedule December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
poor seth, jou is not for him
schedule December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was hot!
I loved this chapter! Great one!
Seto and Jou are finally together!!!!!!!!(YAY!!!!!!)
Haha! Seth must be so jealous. I pity him, it's true. But what can he do...Jou and Seto are meant to be together and this love potion has helped Seto more that it has helped him^^. Maybe Seth will find a way to get Jono again. Who knows...
And the parts with Otogi and Hiroto were really funny. I liked the interaction between the past and the future.
Can't wait to see what will happen next to Jou and Seto.
I love this story. Please continue!
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now THOSE were some HOT lemons. WOOHOO! Finally some hot Seto/Jou action! But Seth is really starting to worry me. He's not going to do something drastic is he? I mean that aphrodisiac was pretty damn sneaky.
person smalvina
schedule December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your story is geting better and better with each chapter
schedule December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! That was quite the action packed chapter, a betrothal, a possible REALLY bad future, three assassinations, being possessed by gods, and you STILL haven't resolved poor Jounouchi's dilemma! Is he gonna sleep with Seto soon? PLEEEEEASE? I wanna lemon! Please don't keep all of us in suspense long!

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