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for Saiou's Tormenter

by Moritani

schedule November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is such an interesting pairing, and so well written. I'm just confused by all the plot inconsistencies between this and the anime, especially since Takuma and Mizuchi are supposed to be orphans. I also had no idea DD took care of Edo--I thought after his dad's death, Takuma half-adopted him, or something like that. I'm also quite surprised that Edo didn't even try to do anything, or that Mizuchi didn't intervene much more than trying to get Saiou to do something about it... Oh well. It's well written, regardless, and I like it, so kudos. Just one thing--did he move in with DD at the end? *confused*
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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I love you. So. Much. DD is one of the most overlooked villains in the GX anime (maybe because he only appears for two episodes + one flashback, jeez). I hardly ever expected anyone to write a DD fic, but I am so glad that you have. Doujinshi site SpringVilla totally supports molester!DD. *amused*

(I expect blowjobs, bondage, and DD/Edo in the next chapter. Oh my god. Yes I do.)

*sick and deranged*

Continue. Like. NOWWWW.