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for Fleeing the Shadows

by tavia454

schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it. Poor Yugi, at least he got to talk to Jou and know that he's okay. I hope Yugi comes to a better understanding by reading the book. Atemu sounds so confused and desparate.
I feel bad for the sacrifice but he may be just what they need to break the case. Great chapter.
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Glad Yami and Yugi started to get together. Glad they found the body. Glad that Yugi is being let into what was and is going on in his own life. Am looking forward to what this all means. Thanks for writing. Later.
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
me love dis fic
pls update again soon
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schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is great! You really are going somewhere with this story and mystery. Great job.
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOOOOOOO! Can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now why do I have a feeling I missed a chapter here... *blinks* damn, how did that happen? I check aff.net daily and I actually missed this... *caoughs* anyway, on to the review for the chap I missed. Anyway, go Yami for breaking through to Yuugi at long last! Now the smut can begin XD okay, so maybe they're not even close to that stage yet but I can dream ne? My dreams are good *nods* Can't wait until they actually do get toether XD Now onwards to the next chapter! I would say update soon as I always do... but that would be poinless since I still have a chapter to read. I'll save it for the next chapter. ONWARDS!

Moony
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*grins* so Atemu is sleep-molesting Yuugi huh? He really should stop trying to suppresss his feelings for Yuugi *snorts* the idiot. And a hero worship thing? Yuugi just also got declared an idiot.... great, they'll fit perfectly together *sweatdrops*

And WHOOT! ANZU'S DEAD! *grins* Now that's cause to celebrate, so who cares if I already knew that was coming. Party time! Yuugi´s gonna freak over it though... even more than he already is. Guess he found what was really going on huh? Tsk, he should've done what Atemu told him. Then again, being the idiot he was just pronounced as, of course he wouldn't listen.

Oh! And Jou and Seto really hit it of great huh? *laughs* I can jsut see Seto pulling Jou out of the car and Jou immediately trying to kill Seto off for it. Can't blame him for it though, not in this freakish situation. For all he knew he was about to get killed... well I think he actually was if that cop hadn't been there but that's beside the point.

Well, that's about all I have to say apart from Great chapter! Cna't wait to read the next one, and update soon! (yes, I finally got to say it!) Hopefully cya Sunday.

Moony
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Yugi. He obviously found out about his friends. I hope Atemu will let him speak to Jou. That would help Yugi a lot. I can just see Jou and Seto fighting and terrorizing poor Ryou. Jou would not be an easy one to settle down. I hope Yugi and Atemu can strengthen their bond.
Good chapter.
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
me like dis
pls pls update soon
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhh, this fic is wonderful!!! I hope everything gets better (emergency wise). Can't wait for the next update