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October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh good cliffie!!!! Awesome Lemon! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hoo. Very nice and original story, this one. Thank you very much for sharing it with the rest of us.
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October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I have returned from Egypt and I bring a review with me! *grins* yeah, it's like 1AM arond here but I'm still pretty much awake - as can be seen by my hyper opening - so I figured I'd read this before you got around to posting a new chap. Guess you've been really busy since you haven't had time to update again since I left. Damn life and it taking people away from the stuff that really matters. Like fanfiction!
Okay, now onto the review. Opening was really great with Atemu showing what he can really do. Dang I'd love to have those flames... maybe in a completely controlled manner so I don't accidentally burn people but yeah, the power's damned awesome. I feel for everyone that pisses him off... maybe except for Ushio and the baddies that are bound to get it later on in the fic. Hmm... maybe Anzu should come back to life and piss him off... I wouldn´t feel for her either... If she dies as painfully as Ushio did / he so had it coming - I'll probably be laughing my ass off as she dies ^^ Go shadowflames!
And damn O.O that really is one fucked up painful ritual. I do feel for all the people who've gone through it. And the soul of the son of Ra? Remind me to bug you about that.... again, when I see you online... whenever that may be with your hectic life. Hopefully Sunday ne?
Great chapter and can't wait to read more so go kill your life so you can write ^^ Cya later!
Moony
Okay, now onto the review. Opening was really great with Atemu showing what he can really do. Dang I'd love to have those flames... maybe in a completely controlled manner so I don't accidentally burn people but yeah, the power's damned awesome. I feel for everyone that pisses him off... maybe except for Ushio and the baddies that are bound to get it later on in the fic. Hmm... maybe Anzu should come back to life and piss him off... I wouldn´t feel for her either... If she dies as painfully as Ushio did / he so had it coming - I'll probably be laughing my ass off as she dies ^^ Go shadowflames!
And damn O.O that really is one fucked up painful ritual. I do feel for all the people who've gone through it. And the soul of the son of Ra? Remind me to bug you about that.... again, when I see you online... whenever that may be with your hectic life. Hopefully Sunday ne?
Great chapter and can't wait to read more so go kill your life so you can write ^^ Cya later!
Moony
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October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is great!!! I can't wait for the next chapter
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October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy reading this story. I think you are doing a wonderful job with defining your characters. I hope to see more of the other couples.
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October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Atemu needs to practice his control. I'm sure he'll be needing it. I'm glad they are getting along better.
Raphael is in trouble, I hope they don't hurt Isis and Shadi.
Raphael is in trouble, I hope they don't hurt Isis and Shadi.
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October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
me love dis
more more more
more more more
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October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! ^_^ I'm so happy when I read one of these. Finally Yuugi and Atemu are togheter! yay!
on a sidenote: "ouch..." was the only thing I could repeat when I read the description of the corpse. And I shivered. Several times.
update when you can ^^ your chapters are well worth the delay
on a sidenote: "ouch..." was the only thing I could repeat when I read the description of the corpse. And I shivered. Several times.
update when you can ^^ your chapters are well worth the delay
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October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Finnally! ^_^ a new chapter! This time I really felt like I had waited forever ._. even though you didn't take longer than usual...
Ha! so things are starting to move a little between Yugi and Atemu ^_^ yay for that. I particularly liked the whole kiss scene, your writing was dynamic and personally I almost saw it in my head as if it were a movie.
That's what I wanted to say ^_^ now the more I read this story, the more I'm starting to really picture it in my head as if it were a movie playing, I hear the dialogues and all. I insist that your writing got more dynamic ^_^ I love it.
I'll be waiting for the next chapter, this ritual thing is really interesting, things are fitting little by little...
don't change the rythm of your story, it's great like that, it's one of it's biggest qualities: you don't reveal too much, but just enough for us to wonder and try to investigate with the characters...
thanks for this chapter ^_^ see you!
Ha! so things are starting to move a little between Yugi and Atemu ^_^ yay for that. I particularly liked the whole kiss scene, your writing was dynamic and personally I almost saw it in my head as if it were a movie.
That's what I wanted to say ^_^ now the more I read this story, the more I'm starting to really picture it in my head as if it were a movie playing, I hear the dialogues and all. I insist that your writing got more dynamic ^_^ I love it.
I'll be waiting for the next chapter, this ritual thing is really interesting, things are fitting little by little...
don't change the rythm of your story, it's great like that, it's one of it's biggest qualities: you don't reveal too much, but just enough for us to wonder and try to investigate with the characters...
thanks for this chapter ^_^ see you!
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October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Did I mention that Atemu can be a pain in the ass? I mean, he finally kisses Yuugi and he's freaking holding back!!! Okay, so it's against a bunch of rules and ethics but that's really not the point right now. The point is that he needs to continue his molesting and have his way with Yuugi *nods* yup, that's the point.
And those thugs are idiots, leaving a body to burn while rain is coming. I mean, come on! You could just see it coming that the rain was gonna make the fire go out and the cops would have evidence cuz the body wasn't completely burned to a crisp! Idiots. Why are minions always this dumb? Seriously, they need brains.
Hmm... I wonder how Yuugi's gonna respond to what he'll be reading int he wacko book of evil rituals... they should so name the book that *grins* Seriously though, maybe if Yuugi knows what's going on and still wants Atemu, our favorite crazy-haired cop will finally get over the fact that what they're doing is against the rules and blah blah blah and have his way with Yuugi... remind me to once more bug you about that on Sunday, given that you're there. I sswear, natural disasters and all the other things that happen are just trying to interfere with us talking over MSN, and with me going bowling again the time has actually become shorter... yeah, we need to do something about that.
Anyway, I'm off to read my Naruto manga and once more overexert my eyes with it like I did yesterday. I'll cya - hopefully - Sunday!
Moony
And those thugs are idiots, leaving a body to burn while rain is coming. I mean, come on! You could just see it coming that the rain was gonna make the fire go out and the cops would have evidence cuz the body wasn't completely burned to a crisp! Idiots. Why are minions always this dumb? Seriously, they need brains.
Hmm... I wonder how Yuugi's gonna respond to what he'll be reading int he wacko book of evil rituals... they should so name the book that *grins* Seriously though, maybe if Yuugi knows what's going on and still wants Atemu, our favorite crazy-haired cop will finally get over the fact that what they're doing is against the rules and blah blah blah and have his way with Yuugi... remind me to once more bug you about that on Sunday, given that you're there. I sswear, natural disasters and all the other things that happen are just trying to interfere with us talking over MSN, and with me going bowling again the time has actually become shorter... yeah, we need to do something about that.
Anyway, I'm off to read my Naruto manga and once more overexert my eyes with it like I did yesterday. I'll cya - hopefully - Sunday!
Moony