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tavi-sama...this is an awesome story and am so happy to have an update..well be back from disney world this weekend..will speak to you then...catti

Wow, this is wonderful! I hope everything gets better with your family!

Wow what can I say!! I started to read this this evening and I find it's yet another good story from the pen of Tavi...can't wait for the next chapter...

yay! finally! Atemu getting the point! too bad poor Yugi had to be scared out of his mind to do so... Glad things are moving on with those two... but for cow's sake, can't they ever have a moment of peace? not even after their first time? XD luckily the phone call wasn't DURING the main events:
"get out of there! now!"
"damn, that could have a double meaning..."
he ^^U sorry, I'm being silly. Great chapter, though we learned less about the case in itself. But even so I'm glad that things work out for Atemu and Yugi... somehow XP
I hope you're ok, I'm glad your dad survived the operation! keep going! aja aja fighting! ^^/

This is really getting good, very exciting. I can't wait to see more.

Yosh! LEMON! *grins* just what I needed to cheer me up again. Apparently the i-net slot on my laptop is busted so it won't make a connection too often. It's very random... but I'm just happy it's working right now. *nods* NaNo can wait until I've actually read all my updates.

And it's great to hear your dad's okay! Congrats on that, I'm really happy for you.

Now then, the chap was great, the FBI is being stupid, the lemon was awesome and the plot thickened! Fear it all people, the story is becoming more interesting with each chap.

Now then, since my i-net only works randomly and rarely, i don't know if I'll be on on Sunday. I'll try of course, and I'll curse my laptop if it won't listen to me, but I doubt that'll actually do me a lot of good. Feels great to do though, so I'll be doing it anyway. Well', let's hope I don't have to ne? I hope to see you on Sunday! Cya!

Moony

First off I would like to say that I'll keep your father in my prayers and pray that everything gets better. Second off I give you credit to be able to pull off a spectular chapter such as that. Great job!!!! I really love this chapter and don't worry the story isn't that weird or hard to follow. Thank you for updating!!!!! Hope you get a new one up soon I'm so addicted

Great chapter. I hope your dad is doing better. I hope he takes his medications and recovers well.
The lemon was hot and I'm glad they were both virgins. I hope Isis and Shadi will be okay and escape unharmed. I hope Atemu and Yugi go to Seto, Jou, Bakura and Ryou. I love it.

Great Chapter! Thanks for writing it. Love it. Now I'm just gushing.

tinkletimekelly

Fred Mertz...nearly laughed my head off on that name..was waiting for Desi to come through the door screaming "Luuuucy, Im home!!!"...love this story...been sneaking peaks all day at work...naughty me!!!....I call it vacation short timer syndrome....laughs...love this story but you know that dont you, tavi-sama?...catti