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that was a very mean place to cut off the ch

wow this just keeps getting better....

Hey ask Moondalian about the italics...she uses them in her stories.....

Great chapter. I wonder if Atemu witnessed his parents death and could do nothing to stop it. I hope Yugi can stop him before he hurts someone. I just know Shad will be okay. I'm glad they are together again.

MUWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA!!!!!!!!!!! I rule for editing! YOSH! *goes on an ego trip that lasts several minutes before calming down* okay, I think I'm calm now...for now ^^; yeah, I've had energy drink... 4 cans... can you tell? (A *coughs* anyway...

Go Jou for being being such an idiot ^^; damnit, Atemu might be short but he's still hot and sexy so he gets away with it. Not to mention he has cool powers to make up for his height. Though i think Jou figured that part out as well by now *snickers*

And go Yuugi! Rush head-first into the danger zone why don't you! Do any of these people know how not to be reckless? No? Didn't think so.

Well, hope you kicked the bastard's ass at work or got him fired. I'll cya next Sundday!

Moony

Cool I love all of the action and drama in this story. Great job.

Oh no. Did you have to stop there? Now what? Gees, I guess I'll have to wait. S'kay, guess that's why it's a suspense fic. And I decided that I like it. Looking forward the net chapter.

This was great! I love what you are doing with this story. I really like all of the action, nicely done.

Dang, dammit, woman (Redneck, huh?) this story's good. Like: the confusion, the introduction of Marik/Malik, and all the "DRAMMA" that's going on. Don't git whatcha whining 'bout. This horse ain't dead yet, it's live and kicking. Yahooo! Okay, got that out of my system. Seriously it's a good story and well worth reading. Looking forward to the next chapter, whenever.

PS. Hope your Dad is doing well. And sorry for your friend.

Wonderful. I really hope your father survives. The waiting is the worst. Even when you are sure you will be shocked and upset. May God be with you and Gayle. That is my daughters name with a different spelling and I will pray for you both.

Tsk,you do have time to update but not to send e a mail with John's reaction to all my nice theories?? I feel abondoned *teary eyes* on the other hand, UPDATE!

Ghe, way to go Atemu for distracting Yuugi XD That's the way to do it. Not to mention way to go Malik, Seto and Bakura. Remind me never to piss off guys who can kill without making the slightest noise; might not be good for me in the future ^^; That, or remind me never to even meet people such as those. That might actually be better.

Hmmm... now I'm wondering what's going on with Shadi... and how the hell Atemu and Yuugi are planning to get back to the others while they have to walk quite a distance. Oh, and the guys persuing them suck, they really do. Great FBI we've got there people. Let's go after our own people! Yeah, best idea ever, yeah! *coughs*idiots*coughs*

Well anyway, I wish you good luck with the situation at home and hope everything will be okay with your dad and the other people. I could say update soon... but that'd be rathe pointless in your situation since you have other things on your mind so yeah. G'luck with that.

Moony