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Yup. I think we could all use some lemons at this point. Good job on the chapter, though. Thanks for writing. C ya.

Tavi-sama sensai...Im sooo sorry about your father and your best friend...Kami what a month, ne?..For you to update this story is an honor and a commitment...you are a loyal writer, friend and companion to do this for your readers...we, I, greatly appreciate it...please let me know when you are ready to go with our story...miss you greatly...but totally understand your circumstances...catti

Traitor? Okay, why have I not been told about all this yet? I mean, that the rest of the people reading this don't know is one thing but ME?!?!?!!?!?! *pouts* that's just mean. Interesting though, actually managing to put in this muh of the original series, while it's suh an AU fic... will you teach me? *puppy-dog eyes*

Oh, and remember that I game I was making Bianca play last Sunday? Well I'm playing the seond part of it AND IT'S TRYING TO KILL ME! I swear, if I didn't have a walktrhough to fall back on... Golden Sun would definitely manage to kill me some way or another. And yes, this is the game I'm gonna make you play ^^ nice ne? Of course I'll make you start with the first game, which is less hard, but we'll get to the second part *grins* AND THEN THE GAME WILL TRY AND KILL YOU INSTEAD OF ME!!!MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Knock knock! Who's there? Cargo. Cargo who? Cargo beep!beep! (knock-knock-joke.com,for my mechanic author) So there it is, as per your request, my lame attempt at "humor". Payback, for when "Impossible Standards" became my escape from RL. Thank you. Though I miss the regular updates,it seems that I appreciate them more,when they show up (for this fic only). Update when you can. And smile when you can.

Great chapter. Yugi is more powerful than he knew. I wonder hwo the traitor is. I hope they can defeat whoever is after them. I hope your family life gets better. RL can be so terrible.

How about some praise, this is really good. I love how the story is shaping up.

AHHH! I want more!!! LOL Gosh I'm so addicted to this story. Keep going and I give you the credit. You are a very strong willed person to keep balancing everything. THANK YOU FOR CONTINUING!!!! I can't wait for more.

Hi! I just read the first chapter and whoo! It rocks! I'll make it through this, slowly, but I'll make it! This is already awesome. So well-written, the dialogue, the scenes! I love how Joey teases Yugi about Brad Pitt and the mention of Harry Potter, like this just happened last week in real life. No JoeyxYugi, though, I expect. Aw, well. Hot YxYY is even better, so I'll be looking forward to that. Jaa!

Hey, tavi-sama....awesome chapter to the long awaited update...(smirks)...couldnt help but smile that "big as a moose" comment...trying to picture that and Dwayne Johnson (the Rock) keeps popping up into my head...dont know why...but hell...he can pop up into my head any time, preferrably naked...laughs...YUMMY!!!...the affects of the white light kind of confused me but figured you would explain it...if not I would make you, laughs, just have to keep nagging as if I dont do that already...(my son would agree)...catti

Well I'm not that awesome with being funny, but I am super-happy that you updated! You really do write well, you have the ability to use your words to paint pictures in my head perfectly! I can't wait for your next update, and I hope that everything turns better soon.