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for Fleeing the Shadows

by tavia454

schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Still just as good dear
person lo
schedule March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story the suspense is great!
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope they will be okay. I wonder why Yugi didn't pick this event up. I hope Marik did not get shot again and it was the other guy. Great chapter.
person cosmic tomato
schedule March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am so sorry...Here I am I've been happily reading this story avidly and I haven't bothered to review for a while. I was right though this IS a good story, you've managed to keep the suspense going whilst adding just the right amount of humour. Can't wait to read more.
person lo
schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done, that was an informative chapter. Can't wait to see more.
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Know what? I liked this chapter. So that's why I'm here reading it again, after I've caught it on ff.net. Yup..........it pretty much cleared up, almost all/any confusion I may of had. Now, I can just wait for an update, whenever. But, please do something soon. I really need something "adult" to read. Pickings have been very slim lately. I'm almost tempted to write. Gads, that would be awful.


"Hats off, and thanks, to all writers/authors, who amuse/entertain, us, sometime ungrateful, readers(ie. ME)
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so who wants to join me in the 'Must-maim-/-kill-Pegasus' club? I mean, sure Dartz is an ass too but somehow Pegasus seems o be the main bastard so I'm just going to hate him more than I do Dartz. My club will be awesome *nods* yup, with T-shirts and caps and everything. I'll be great. XD

Well, loadsa new info this chap. I feel for Ryou for not mastering his power yet, though I'm sure he'll get the hang of it sooner or later. So typical for he King of Thieves to have a gift like that, but that's the point to is so yeah. Hmm... wonder how big Bakura's pile of stolen things is by now... if he stared it as a kid with cookies it must be huge...

Anyway, great chap and I hope you get some sleep soon because you clearly need it. Try just taking a random day off work and spending it by doing absolutely nothing but being lazy. I promise you that you'll feel much better after that.

Well, I'll cya Sunday hopefully,

Moony
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Things are heating up. They are finding clues and answers. I'm glad Yugi and Atem found his memeories. They are an important part. I know Ryou will earn his ring soon. He seems to be getting closer. He is going to need it. I'm glad Malik was warned in time. Maybe those files will help them even more.
I hope Seto and Jou find out more in that town. Great chapter.
Pegasus and Dartz and their whole group need to be brought down.
I'm sad that this is ending soon. I really love it.
person DR
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, I have to say this is interesting! I'm really enjoying it, and I hope you manage to finish it!

BTW, a little note: If the town in Colorado is the one I think it is, it's 'Vail' not 'Vale'.
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I really love it. So sorry for any late reviews. I am currently working 60+ hours a week and don't have a computer at work. No laptops allowed.