rate_review Reviews

Hey ya! Welcome back! Neat chapter by the way. Later.

Ithink I know how hard this has been for you. It is very hard to deal with the subject right now. We can wait for you. The story is incredible so far so a little waiting will not hurt us.

tavi.... take all the time you need. Character deaths are hard to read (hence the chapter warnings) so it's not unusual that they may even be just as hard to write, even at the best of times. It's easy to kill off the "bad guys", though to kill off a "beloved" character takes a great deal of "emotional" consideration. You thought AofM was to be your "dark" fic, but it's seems that this story is the one that is reflecting closer to what you're dealing with in RL. Only time lessens the sting of the loss of a loved one. And this story can wait. We'll still be here when your ready. Till then good thoughts and prayers (if your religious) are with you.

All things considered take as much time as you need I know you'll get there eventually and besides I ain't going nowhere... Though It's nice that you explained what was happenin' rather than leave us in the dark, it's much appreciated. Stay strong....

Great chapter! This story feels as if it is coming to the climax and you have done a great job in getting up to this point. I hope there is a nice long chapter on how those bastards suffer slowly and painfully, in gruesome detail, for what they have done over the years. I can't wait to see more.

O.O.......O.O

I love this story and how you've portrayed the characters thus far. Storyline too, I can't imagine what may have sparked this wonderful plot bunny.

Keep on going, I'm loving every bit of it and wants to read more. *demands it* *snickers*

I'll be posting some of my Yu-Gi-Oh! Stories soon too, so check out my profile, or email me if you wishes a copy. *grin*
-Heero

I'm glad Yugi and Bakura know the others are there. Ryou is doing great. I hope something can be done to help Shadi when this is all over. I'm glad no one else was seriously hurt. I'm glad they have backup on the way. If they keep going the way they are they mey not need except for cleanup.

But its such a CUTE plot bunnie!

Okay... I really am rather late with this... and I have no excuse. All I can say is that I´ve just been too damned lazy to read ANY of my updates, so you´re not the only one I´ve been skipping ^^; damn, and I saw AoM was updated again too... damn, that's another thing I skipped and need to read 2 chaps to now... *coughs* yeah... I'll get on that... eventually.

Ranting will now cease and reviewing will now start. Okay, so Mariku and Malik are in deep trouble... even if Yuugi feels nothing more than just a little trouble with them. Yuugi really oughta get his senses checked y'know XD I really do feel sorry for those two.

So, only 3-4 more chaps huh? Well I guess we're really really really close to the end by now then. I know what's gonna happen people! Envy meh! MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *grins* Can't wait to for the next chapter... though I'm pretty sure I'll be lazy when you do update it but bleh, you know me. Cya Sunday!

Moony

Omg, please tell me Marik saved Malik???!! I just started reading this today..and i already finished 16 chapters! Your story si so addicting..lol. You are doing a wonderful job, please continue writing..Im waiting for more! Update soon, pretty please..this is so good. sorry im impatient. 8D