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September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YOU MUST CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Looking forward to more. This already has that "feel" to it. The one that made "Impossible Standards" the story it turned out to be. Keep writing, I'm sure you'll be fine.
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September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love this, I can see real potential in it!
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September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sweatdrops* leave it up to Atemu to make Yuugi faint like that. Stupid temper of his. Hello! Future lover y'know! Fainting should only accur from extreme amounts of pleasure! *crosses arms* He can really be an idiot at times.
Well, great story so far. Ghe, I can just see Atemu bending spoons out of boredm *snickers$* Poor spoons. Well, Update soon!
Moony
Well, great story so far. Ghe, I can just see Atemu bending spoons out of boredm *snickers$* Poor spoons. Well, Update soon!
Moony
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September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! I love it so far keep going
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September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhh you're sooooo good!!! I've yet to see any type of fic you can't write. This is great, please continue!
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter. I love it. I think you are doing great with the story. I definitely think your villians are evil enough. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was great; well-written, in character and such an original premise! I can't wait to Yami as a cop. Keep writing!
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August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I love the way you write, it makes it easy for the story to come alive. I've read very few stories written this way, which is such a pity. I shall wait for the next chapter in barely restrained anticipation. ^_^
- Sacuna
- Sacuna
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August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW Tavi!!! yet another Awesome creation you've made here!!! i cant wait to read more!
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August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yea!! This will give me a distratction from the fact the "Impossible Standards" is done. Can't wait for the next chapter!