rate_review Reviews

Yo! Another interesting story with even more characters then the last. Yeah! I can't wait read more about scary cults killing off the cast and what they want to do with Yugi exactly. Hm... Anyway Can't wait!

I hope Yuugi learns to trust Atemu, they kind of got off on the wrong foot.
I hope whoever that is doesn't hurt Honda or Anzu. I hope theat detective gets there for Jou soon. Awesome story.

Yay!! Update!! Two actually cuz I missed the first one. Anyway, this story is really good. Not much of on the edge of your seat kinda stuff, but it's fun to read.

It's ok if they don't bed each other right away. It makes a lot more sense, I prefer waiting than just having them say "I'm bored... oh well, let's have sex to entretain ourselves! ^_^" now that would be weird...
Writing this kind of fiction is hard, but your doing just well. The hard part is when you have to decide if you're either saying too much or not enough. But this is just the third chapter, so things still need to be a little foggy. You just specially caught my attention with the "protective big brother" character. Now I want to know who it is.. hmm..
The plot thickens...

Laughs...you are such a tease...now remember no typing while drinking..or you will have a mess to clean in the morning...*giggles*...now where did you get the word 'cataleptic'...I like it, it rolls nicely off the tongue...this story is truly awesome..even though in my current state I have to reread the whole thing to remember it...laughs...*rolls eyes*...still putting spatulas in the wrong drawer, catti

Here I am! reviewing again! ^_^
I'm sooooo sorry I took so long to answer your mail. Please don't think I gave up the idea, I'm still very excited about it, only these past few days were kinda complicated. I won't bore you with the details, but anyway, now I'm as good and happy as ever ^_^.

And there you go with another great chapter. I like the fact that it won't be love at first sight for once (gods know a crimson-eyed person would , at least, startle me ^^U), they'll need to learn to trust each other. Also, I tend to like it more when Atemu isn't all that good... you know, like when he's a nice guy but with a short temper (well... U like what you did ^_^UU)
um.. well, it's six o'clock in the morning here, so I don't have a lot of coherent thoughts in my head. I'll answer your mail as soon as I shower to wake up completely ^^. I guess the main point of this review is saying I liked the chapter ^_^ now I want to see what Yuugi's reaction will be when he wakes up!!

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOh! Suspense! Looking forward to the next chapter.Later.

This is getting interesting.

Now this story is getting exciting!

ZOMG you must must must must MUST continue this story!!! if you dont...ill cry!! pleeeeeeeeeeaaaase please continue! i stopped playing WoW to read this chapter! you know how hard that is to do?? if no one else begs for you to continue, please do it for me??!! *puppy dog eyes*