rate_review Reviews

for some reason I love the idea of Atemu twisting spoons XD makes me laugh. I'll just keep on repeating that you lead this story with great talent. And now I want to know what was it that Yugi saw ^^U. I hope everything went alright for you and you solved your problems, I know we barely know each other but if you want to talk about something, just to get it out of your chest I'll be there to listen and try to help.
On a brughter note: do I really need to say that I enjoyed this chapter inmensly? ^_~

thought you had forgotten about us...man spend all that time rereading stories...committin them to memory and you take fooooorever to update..laughs...its an awesome story and once I reread it I actually remembered it...Im getting better I know I am...love you to tears...love your stories...still waiting for that promised story of J/K...catti

Nicely done, you are tieing the chararcters into this story wonderfully. this is very good.

Well i think that this was a great chapter, no criticisim needed!

Nice chapter, I like the fact that you are able to move the story along.

Awww man that was awesome...love the shadow magic...yes it can do good, people!!..Figured you would throw Seto and Jou together...(dont you owe me a S/J story?)...I have some return of memory...love the 2006 corvettes but my love is still and always a 1965 Mustang Convertable...OH YEAH!!!!.....I love this story....just need to update more quickly...laughs...just a little push...thats all...catti

Another great chapter! I like the way the story is forming, pieces of information here and there. It's kind of slow, but that's just because I'm being impatient >_< I'm always like that. So much fun! I'm waiting for the next chapter.

Great chapter. I hope Atemu can keep his hormones in check for a little while. I'm glad he got Yugi to wake up and trust him a little. I hope Seto can keep Jou safe.
I wonder if the others are okay, I hope so but I don't really have much hope that they are.
Wonderful story.

You're doing really fine! honestly! I feel this is the better chapter you wrote for this story so far, things are getting clearer little by little. I also feel like you've improved a little your writing style. You give just enough information for us to keep wondering. All in all, a very good chapter! ^_^ keep it up!

Okay, so I finally made some time to read this *sweatdrop* and no... I still haven't finished my own chapter... which i really need to do today so you can actually edit before Saturday. Remind me to slap myself the next I procrastinate like this.

Anyway, since I'm reviewing, back to your story. Damn Atemu needs to get his hormones ibn check XD Would've actually been funny if he'd just gone ahead and kissed Yuugi when they were still in the bushes. I think that would've shocked Yuugi into submission y'know. Okay, it probably would've shocked him to a point where he'd end up in a coma with all the confusion but that's sooooo beside the point here. I do feel sory for Yuugi though. Poor kid went through more than most people do in their lives put together. Hope he recovers okay soon.

Oh, and that plotbunny that wouldn't give you the full plot to this thing is doing fine. It says since you wanted to kill it, it now refuses to help you. It's actually dicussing revenge plans with Hentai... yeah, I think we both know what that will mean *grins evilly* I've named the bunny Mike... and don't ask me why cuz I have no idea. I just named it that. Anyway, expect his revenge action soon.

Now I'm off to go take a shower and then write... since I desperately need to finish that chapter. Great chapter and update soon!

Moony